I guess I got sucked into this enough to write it out and finish it… so here goes nothing 🙂
This was one of many attempts to write something for Sapphyre the Mermaid, and while I ironically still remember the story, I never finished these drawings. And then, as well all know, when Sean/Luis showed up, everything for Sapphyre’s story started falling into place at last, and this whole weird thing was scrapped.
Since I based the story on Cirque du Soleil’s “KA,” the story is VERY surface level and condensed for ‘time.’ With that, and nearly all the characters being someone from the Tale of Ace Gallagher, it feels very much like a play that the Ace folks are putting on. Maybe “Gemini” and “The Doctor” are Sapphyre and Christopher? The Gemini Archives were still going on at this point, so it’s very possible for a Jill brain to do.
Since this was meant to be a rough sketch to get the story out before fully realizing it digitally, these are not incredible drawings lol. There's a lot of unfinished bits, the backgrounds are here and there, the words are almost unreadable at times, and even the shading to designate the merkind/sharkind's markings fade out. I’ll type out the words in case they’re too scribbly.
Lastly, seeing this now with all the mermaids "naked"... yeah, I think I made the right call in giving them clothes. It's just awkward enough, even though I thought I was being cool by making them "natural." It’s funny how things change.
Page 1

Song: "O Makunde" (Intro only)
A small sailing ship on a vast ocean approaches a storm... and someone is watching below.
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This is the best drawn page in the entire thing… probably because it’s the first page. Don’t get used to it lol.
Page 2

Nearby, among the rocky crags in the deep ocean, a village of merpeople sing and dance in a lively celebration. A regal mermaid sings at the center as a younger mermaid swims up to her.
Kallista: Lady Aria!
Page 3

Aria: Kallista, my dear! Where is Sapphyre?
Kallista: Oh, you know her; she's probably off by herself again.
Aria: I should have known. I hate for her to miss the celebration.
Kallista: I will find her.
Aria: Good. And bring her this - a necklace from the celebration. Perhaps she will join us?
Kallista: I do hope so. (returns to the crowd and finds another merman) Hey Shael! Let's go find Phyre!
Shael: All right.
They swim off together outside of the village to find her.
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I think Aria's TOAG counterpart was Mioko’s sister? But this character does become Neva in the final Sapphyre story, and Kallista/Khallista also makes the transition, though here, she's based on Athena. Shael is James.
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Kalli: Phyre! I wondered where you'd gone off to... there's a celebration today! You must come back to the Enclave!
Sapphyre: What are we celebrating this time?
Kalli: A year without sharks!
Sapphyre: (turns) Oh, hi Shael.
Shael: Hi.
Kalli: Yeah, he's here too.
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I've always liked the word Enclave and this is also why Sapphyre's village in the final version is called Enclei.
Page 5

Kalli: He's so quiet you forget he's there... not unlike you. Only if you're quiet, you're usually not even there.
Phyre: Kallista...
Kalli: Here.
Phyre: What's this?
Kalli: A necklace from the celebration. Please come back with us, Phyre. Come celebrate!
Phyre: (looks at the necklace in her hands) ...I just... I don't know...
Kalli: Phyre, you need to! You never do anything with the other merkind! Why? Why do you stay so separate?
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The dialog in this is probably not how I'd write it now, lol
Page 6

Shael: Kalli, be kind.
Kalli: I just want to know! She's so separate from everyone else! And half the time, she's separate from us!
Phyre: (heatedly) Maybe because half the time I don't fit in with the rest of merkind.
Kalli: Fit in? How do you not fit in? We're all the same!
Phyre: We're NOT the same.
Kalli: (also heatedly) All right–do you think you'd fit in better with the HUMANS??
Phyre: I doubt I'd fit in with ANYONE!
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I think I translated my markings for Kalli’s speech bubble there... did I not have an eraser? lol
Page 7

Shael: ...Phyre!
Kalli: (murmuring) Leave her be... maybe she'll come back around.
Shael: It's storming on the surface.
Kalli: Then let's return to the Enclave.
The scene transitions above the surface as Shael swims away.