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Kaiza
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October 15, 2024

The concert hall was vibrant with the orchestra in the throes of a concerto. The audience erupted with applause as the piece ended.

Kaiza stood up among the other woodwinds, bending her knee and bowing her head in tandem with the rest. Her face was flushed from the extended song, spackles of sweat on her brow. She smiled widely as her brown eyes scanned the audience from behind her round-framed glasses.

Four empty chairs caused her smile to wane. She put on a polite one, took another bow, and filed off the stage.

Kaiza undid her ponytail before turning her attentions to disassembling her heckelphone. She looked up from her task only when the backstage doors opened, but visitors bearing flowers did not so much as glance her way.

She changed from her long, black skirt and white, button-up blouse into a floral tunic and jeans. She switched her heels for clogs, grabbed her sack-bag of clothes, and shouldered her heckelphone case.

It was dark outside the concert hall; night having settled in during the lengthy performance. The humidity was stifling with a stickiness in the air and on the concrete.

Kaiza pulled out her phone, going to the last page where her rideshare app was.

She jolted as a car horn beeped. “Kaiza! Over here!”

Her mother was leaning out the SUV window, waving at her.

Kaiza trotted over with a smile on her face. She wrenched open the back door, her smile flickering at the empty seats. The front passenger seat was also vacant save a grocery store bouquet.

She unloaded her stuff in the back before joining her mother in the front. She played with the flowers, sniffing them.

                “Did you see any of it,” Kaiza asked.

                “A bit in the middle, I think.” There was a pause. “We couldn’t get the boys ready quick enough, so Dad stayed back with them. And then I realized no one bought you flowers, and so many of the other parents had flowers, so I left before the crowd to get some.”

                “They’re very pretty,” Kaiza said.

                “I’ll have Dad buy some roses for your play. We should get some carnations too so that your brothers can toss them at the stage.”

Kaiza put forth her support for the idea. She gazed out the window as they drove home.

 

The thick curtain rose, and Kaiza was washed with the lights and applause. Kaiza joined hands with her fellow wood nymphs, stepped forward, and bowed. She squinted fruitlessly at the blur that was the audience without her glasses, gaining no information before she dashed back with her line to make space for the leads to bow.

Kaiza left her line to join the crew line, repeating the bowing process. She dashed off the stage once the curtain fell, maneuvering about the chaos with her hands out to guard against bumping into someone or something in the mess.

She opted to remove her makeup but kept the costume to save time. She donned her frames and hurried from backstage.

Her parents and brothers were not among those waiting for the performers.

                “Hey, Kaiza, awesome work on the forest sets.” She was handed a bouquet of roses. “These came for you.”

The note included was an apology for not showing up, explaining that her brothers both got into something and were vomiting everywhere.

Kaiza wrinkled her nose at the image and headed out to find a ride.

 

The kitchen was modest in size and bright. The appliances and fixtures were new, but the floor was made of outdated linoleum. There was a table with two chairs and two short benches off to the side. The center counter had a taller section with three barstools.

Kaiza sat at the counter munching on a bologna sandwich. Her hair was tied up in a knot. She wore a simple, tasteful navy dress.

Identical twin boys around seven came tearing into the kitchen. The one wearing blue snatched a handful of chips off Kaiza’s plate as they dashed through on their way to the living room.

Kaiza stood to brush off the crushed chips that her brother had not successfully carried off.

                “What are you doing eating,” her mother asked as she entered the kitchen. “You’re going to be late for the gallery! Go wash up and do your face.”

Kaiza eyed the rest of her sandwich before retreating to the upstairs bathroom.

The bathroom was small with a double vanity squeezed where a single would have fit better. Damp towels of various sizes were all over the floor and counterspace. Toys were cluttering the bathtub, and the toilet seat was up.

Kaiza pulled open one of the mirror cabinets above the sink, standing on her toes to reach the makeup bag on the top shelf.

She removed her glasses to dab on some mascara, leaving that the only decoration for her eyes. She ignored the foundation and concealer, just applying a maroon lip balm that tasted vaguely of raspberries.

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I did this one after the Hazel thing to see if it was the story as a whole that I liked comic style for, or if it was character specific. It's the story. But the idea with this was to highlight Kaiza, so you have this big sister, overachiever who has a heck of a lot of extracirriculars that she does good to great in. Orchastra, theater, photography (where I stopped), and then she was going to get an academic achievement award, and it was going to end with her meeting her student advisor Mr. Gedney. I think if I ever start being consistent and typing more, I'll get to Witchboy and I'm pretty sure Kaiza's achievements will come out in story even if it's just casual talks. How she met Mr. Gedney will, so I didn't feel like I needed to finish this.

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Song: "Threat"

Shael searches for Sapphyre... and finds her necklace at the edge of the kelp forest.

Kalli: Lady Aria! I've spoken to everyone! No one has seen Phyre!

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Kalli: ...And I have to wonder... if it was my fault... I was rude to her... I shouldn't have said what I did. It's hard for her because... because of her... heritage.

Aria: (consolingly) Kallista, dear...

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Shael: ...Near the kelp forest.

Aria: ...No!

Kalli: You... you don't think...

Shael: I fear the SHARKS have taken her...

Kalli: Lady Aria-what should we do?

 

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Aria: ...We cannot risk war... we are not certain she was taken.

Kalli: Even if she doesn't think she is, she is still one of us.

Aria: ...And we will fight for her.

The scene transitions to the other side of the kelp forest.

Shark King: Otieno! Iolana!

Otieno: Sir.

Shark King: ...Where have you two been?

Otieno: We were scouting, sir. Like you said to. Patrolling the kelp forest and the outskirts of the Merkind's realm.

Iolana: And we found a MERMAID in the kelp forest.


Dorian as the scarred and bitter Shark King fits surprisingly well, hah. But do I remember his name? I do not.

 

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King: A mermaid?

Iolana: Yes... we have reason to believe she is a scout sent to spy on us.

Keiki: She's right!!

King: Keiki...

Keiki: But Father–

King: One mermaid alone is not a threat.

Iolana: She had a HUMAN with her.

King: ...Go on.

Iolana: This one is always alone... until now. It could be the merkind are using humans to better plan an attack!

Keiki: Father, we must do something! We must retaliate!

King: We cannot be so quick to fight, my son... To engage the Merkind in battle will mean casualties on both sides, and we are still recovering our numbers.


Keiki looks like he may be based on Henri from the Elemental Guardians fanfic who later grew up to become Phoenix in ToAG. Also still no one seems to be baffled by why a human is underwater but ok!

 

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King: However... if what you say is true, it would be best to prepare than to be caught off guard.

Keiki: So we will fight them?

Iolana: Should we prepare for war?

King: Yes. Prepare for war. But if there is no threat... (gazes at Iolana and Otieno) ...it will be on YOUR heads.

Iolana's form mirrors Sapphyre as they gaze blankly onward.

Chris: Phyre! (cozies up to her) Still as elusive as ever.

Phyre: I was waiting for you.

Chris: I suppose I did say I wanted to come up for air again.

The two swim up to the surface, past the edge of the kelp forest.


….AND that's all that's drawn. I'll try to fill in the rest of the story as best as I can remember using the music in one last part!

 

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Sapphyre: A Tale - Part 3
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Page 17

Song: "Pursuit"

Iolana: Otieno, would you look at that!

Otieno: Iolana, I see it... though it's awfully hard to believe...

Iolana: The mermaid has returned... and she's brought a two-legged friend with her... And now's the time we finally pay her a visit.

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Otieno: Well! Look here!

Iolana: The lone mermaid again separated from her companions!

Phyre: Sharks!

Otieno: That's right, but if you're nice we may let you go...

Phyre: You can't do anything to me–we're at peace!

Otieno: You're alone... who's gonna know?


Iolana and Otieno are Dawn and Ed if you couldn't tell, lol. I think I looked up all kinds of water-related names for the characters; they’re all very unique. Also I love how no one questions how a human is underwater like this.

 

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Chris: I don't believe she is alone!

Iolana: (jealously) Yes, Otieno, I don't believe she IS...

She swims closer to Christopher.

Iolana: You, however, HUMAN, would make a fine trophy... A proper tribute to the Shark King... So, while we're at it, we might as well bring him a mermaid SPY!

Phyre: You'd call me a spy, would you? The only way you'd do that... is if you could have caught me!


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Otieno: I knew they'd bolt!

Iolana: Shut up!!

Chris: Up ahead–we can hide in there!

Phyre: The kelp forest? But that's the division between our land and the sharks!

Chris: It doesn't look like the sharks are following boundary lines at the moment.

Phyre: Good point.

Otieno: They're going in the kelp forest!

Iolana: That'll slow them down!

They swim away as the sharks follow after, leaving Sapphyre's necklace behind.

 

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As Sapphyre and Christopher–and Iolana and Otieno–make their way through the kelp forest, they get caught in the vines.

Phyre: They're going to catch us–

Llyr: No they won't–come this way!

He hides them away in the kelp.

Iolana: Wh–where are they?? We couldn't have lost them!

Otieno: I don't see them up ahead... Maybe they've gone back the other way!


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Llyr: Good, they turn away.

Sapphyre notices Christopher has a hand on her shoulder and they nervously part.

Llyr: You are safe for now, though they may return.

Chris: Thank you, sir, we truly appreciate it... May I ask who–who you are?

Llyr: Oh! I apologize... I am Llyr, and you are in the realm of the Kelp-Dwellers!

 

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Song: "Forest"

Kambu: Ah! Welcome! Llyr, thank you for guiding these two. I am Kambu, leader of the Kelp-Dwellers.

Phyre: (shyly) I'm Phyre. And this is Christopher.

Kambu: A pleasure. It has been some time since we have seen a mermaid--or a greater expanse since we've seen a human. How is it you breathe underwater?

Chris: Well–

Phyre: I've never heard of Kelp-Dwellers before.

Kambu: Ah, because we live in secret. We are found when we need to be found.

Chris: Actually, Llyr found us.

Kambu: We do find those who need us if necessary!


Leafy Mioko and Raeya! 

 

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Kambu: Llyr is young, but he knows what he is doing.

Kelp Queen: You are free to stay as long as you wish.

Kambu: All are welcome! No one is turned away!

Chris: I believe we should stay awhile, don't you think?

Phyre: But what about you? Don't you need to return to the surface?

Chris: I'll let you know when I'm ready to return. Let's enjoy this peaceful place for now... together.


I don't remember the Kelp Queen/Raeya's name…

 

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Sapphyre and Christopher find themselves getting closer...

But Iolana and Otieno are unable to find them.

Otieno: Come on, Iolana, we're not going to find them.

Iolana: ...Fine.

They swim away, reluctantly.


That was a quick falling in love sequence, lol. It’s like the whole story was put on 2x speed (or more lol).

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Sapphyre: A Tale - Part 2
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Page 8


Song: "Storm"

The man is taking on water and his sails are torn as he battles to stay afloat in the storm.

Christopher: This–this may be it... This is where my journey will... end!

The boat capsizes.


Christopher was an attempt at a new character but he was heavily influenced by the Eleventh Doctor. With the rest of the characters being borrowed I’m surprised I was concerned about making him a separate character, honestly.

 

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Song: "Deep"

The man struggles to return to the surface, but the water, waves, storm, and the breaking boat prevent him. He soon falls motionless, sinking to the ocean floor... beside a mermaid.

 

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She swims up to him, cautiously. 

Phyre: A human... what do I do? He'll die... if he hasn't already. But I'm not supposed to do anything... he's a HUMAN... But...

 

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Gently leaning over him, Sapphyre brings her lips to his and kisses him.

At once, the man gasps, eyes wide open. Horrified, Sapphyre darts away as he struggles to catch his 'breath.'

Christopher: What... How... I'm... I'm underwater! I'm breathing...

Their eyes meet.


I'm not sure what gives Sapphyre the gill-giving ability in this story… it’s possible it’s a mermaid thing (since she mentions how she’s not ‘supposed’ to do something to help him–insinuating that she could?) or maybe Lady Aria gave her the ability like Neva does in the final. If it was ever explained, it was in the bits I didn’t get to and don’t remember.

 

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Chris: Wait! You're–you're a–Gahh! Th-this water! This is just... so odd...

He feels his neck.

Chris: AGHH!! My neck! What on earth?! GILLS?? (defeatedly) My word... I have got to be dreaming. I've died and I'm dreaming. I have to be... Seeing things... Breathing underwater...

He notices Sapphyre.

 

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Song: "Shadowplay"

Chris: But... but it's not a dream, is it. I'm really here, and you're really a mermaid. And you... you saved me...

Phyre: (backs away before he can touch her) ...Yes.

Chris: ...Why?

Phyre: You needed saving...

Chris: And the... GILLS... How long will these be here?

Phyre: I'm not sure... long enough for you to return to the surface.

Chris: What makes you think I want to return?

Phyre: Because-because you're human... you belong there.

Chris: I suppose so... (reaches for her hand) ...What's your name?

 

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Sapphyre again retreats.

Chris: ...Sorry.

Phyre: What's yours?

Chris: Christopher. And you?

Phyre: Phyre.

Chris: Phyre?

Phyre: As in Sapphyre.

Chris: ...Beautiful name. It fits you. (watches her swim by) ...You don't say much, do you?

Phyre: I don't often speak to humans.

Chris: What about other mermaids?

 

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Sapphyre turns away, flustered.

Chris: What's wrong?

Phyre: (rushes at him) What about you?

Chris: (surprised) What about me?

Phyre: Why would you say you would not return to the surface?

Chris: I am merely a traveler... I've no ties to anyone on the surface... I move where I must, stay where I must... I was sailing where I must when the storm did me in...

Phyre: Do you feel you... belong on the surface?

Chris: I suppose... Don't quite belong anywhere. Why? You seemed rather defensive a moment ago...

Phyre: It was nothing.

Chris: Is it really? Something tells me there is as much about you that is hidden... As there is about ME.


Oh, the dialog… lol

 

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Phyre: It's just... nothing. I have a few friends. Sometimes I just need to be alone. More than the other mermaids... a lot more...

They get closer.

Phyre: (turns away) ...Why am I telling you this...

Chris: I'm not sure. But something tells me you needed to.

Phyre: (closes her eyes and begins to give in) I suppose.

But two figures are watching in the distance…

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