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Kalon 6
May 07, 2025

Kalon perused a cardboard book with colored locks of hair taped in as she sat in one of the overstuffed chairs meant for waiting customers. She glanced up to follow Strauss cross the salon with her green eyes, watching her grab clippers from a drawer, and then returning to browsing.

“Just tell me now if you are actually here to color your hair, or if you’ll back out again.”

Kalon fiddled with the two hoops in her left earlobe. “I’m mulling it over.”

“You’ve had green, and then shock yellow, and then purple hair. Just pick something so that I can have the dye ready.”

“Innit likes my natural hair.” She pulled at random locks in her curly bob. “Can’t say why. It’s such a drab shade of brown.”

“Bother Innit!” Strauss waved her buzzing clippers passionately. “You’re the one wearing it. You should like it.”

Kalon smirked. “And you get to play with my hair, and be paid for it.”

“A small factor, friend.” She forcefully turned her customer’s head to buzz off his other sideburn. “I quite like my natural color, but even I put in a few lowlights. It makes it pop.”

“What would the high and lows be for such a mousy brown? Some shade of grey? More brown? I won’t go blonde again. That was a mistake.”

“It washed you out. Made you look ill. I did try to warn you.”

She fingered the unbuttoned top button of her cardigan, putting the book away with a sigh. She watched out the large window, knowing it was the direct route to the library and knowing Innit was due to arrive within the hour.

“Thank you, sir, for your business. See you in two weeks!”

Kalon gave a friendly smile and nod to the departing patron, uncrossing her legs to stand. She leaned her elbows up on the counter to watch Strauss busy about getting things ready for whatever random walk-ins would come.

“I should bring Innit by. Let you do something with his hair.”

“It is the second quickest way to my good side.”

“Only the second?”

Strauss held up her piercing needle. “Nothing quite like willingly being stabbed by me to win me over.” She frowned, shaking her head. “I know you’re growing it out, but letting the ends frizz is not going to help. Let me trim it. Just a few centimeters to give it shine. Completely free, of course.”

She shrugged and went to one of the salon chairs. She twisted it to gaze out the window as Struass pulled a comb and shears from their places.

“Pop off that sweater, Kalon. I don’t want to get little hair bits on it. They’ll never come out.”

“Oh.” Kalon turned pink. “Yes.” She cleared her throat. “I don’t have a blouse on under here.”

“Laundry day?”

“...Sure.”

“I was wondering why it was all buttoned except the top two. Normally the other way round for that. Well, so long as you have your bra, I don’t see the problem. I’ll turn you away from the window and lock the door. Any walk-ins can wait outside five minutes.”

Kalon braced in front of the chair, slowly undoing the buttons on her cardigan. She shut her eyes as she slid it off.

“Kalon?”

She peeked at Strauss with one eye. “Yes?” Kalon crossed her arms over her black lacy bra. “Can we hurry? I’m rather chilly.”

“Is that red rash on your tit a reaction to the lace?” Strauss raised her eyebrows. “Looks an awful lot like a love bite.”

Kalon turned scarlet and clamped her hand over the mark. She searched for an excuse, squirming under Strauss’s scrutinizing stare. She took a breath and allowed her hands to rest in her lap. She gave her friend a small smile, shrugging.

“You let him under your shirt!” Strauss covered her mouth. “Kalon! Are you mad? You can’t do that. He’ll go for more!” She rushed to stand between Kalon and the large window. “What if this gets around?”

“What of it?”

Strauss stared, agape. “What of…? You can’t be serious. Your reputation as the brilliant granddaughter of the librarian would evaporate, just to start. You have a shot to have an actual marriage pool, you know. Not like me with the two random townie boys asking if I was available.”

“Aren’t you marrying one of those random boys in a few months?”

“Perhaps this autumn if our savings–. Don’t distract me!”

She inspected the mark on the mirror while Strauss huffed on. It had been more purple yesterday. It was healing quickly, a testament to the care in which it was placed.

“Good thing he didn't bite.”

“Excuse me?” Strauss looked ready to scream. “Did you just whisper about this bloke biting you? Does he bite you?’

“I was never going to have a marriage pool.” Kalon crossed her legs. “I wasn't sure anyone would even consider marrying me.”

“You're doing grand making sure no one ever would!” Strauss threw herself into the neighboring chair. “If you keep going on, if you go any further, then it'll get out and you'll just be known as some… practice girl.”

Kalon dropped her hands to her lap, picking at her eggplant nails. She dragged her fingers off her lap and dug them into her stomach. She went to stand, but Strauss stopped her, muttering about how she still needed a trim. They were absent their usual chatter and eye contact; Kalon not meeting her own reflected eyes, instead looking at the mark just above her lacy bra line.

She had heard the term ‘practice girl’ before, and from Strauss. She had read about them, knew the term was more recent but the idea of there being a difference between marriageable and unmarriageable people–not just women–was older than the records. She was the unmarriageable.

“You’re beautiful and brilliant, Kalon.” Strauss fluffed Kalon’s hair to assess her work. “I don’t understand why you have this strange mindset that you’re lesser.” She hummed. “You stuck with purple longest, but I’d bet a primary would look killer. Not yellow, of course. A more minty green would work too.”

Kalon donned her cardigan, slowly fastening the buttons. Her insides writhed as she watched Strauss clean the shears.

“I need to tell you something. Before I came to live here….” She tensed at Strauss’s prickly gaze. “If I tell  you that I’ve been….” She chipped at her nail polish. “Do you remember when we first met at the library? What books you’d ask me to fetch for you?”

Strauss smiled sheepishly. “Trashy, graphically written, paperback romances.” She laughed. “We were so young. So innocent. So curious.” She giggled. “Mr. Gousa never would have fetched those for me had I asked.”

“Except, I wasn’t curious. I never had the chance to experience that curiosity… because….” Her eyes stung. She was shaking. “And any curiosity I may’ve had with Innit has gone.”

Kalon jumped to her feet as Strauss sank back into the nearest chair. She paced in her heels, picking her nails and avoiding direct eye contact. The glimpse of her friend in her peripherals was enough to see Strauss was processing and connecting the vagueness of her statements.

“Your grandparents–?”

“They aren’t my real grandparents. Gramps paid a single twenty note for me. That was all it took to save my life.”

“Then… the confusion over when their son died…?”

“It was shortly after leaving home, not just a handful of years ago.”

“Explains why you were not upset when you came to live here. And always looked as if someone slapped you across the face when they offered sympathies.” Strauss leaned into her hands, elbows propped on her knees, staring at the floor. “This is quite a lot to absorb.”

“I know.” Kalon eased into the chair next to her. “I’ve wanted to tell you for ages. It’s just… how?” She played with her unbuttoned top button. “I did not foresee a love bite being the catalyst. Though, I also didn’t foresee someone like Innit coming along.”

Strauss grew chilly. “Does this bloke of yours know about this?”

“He does. Not the explicit details, but he can imagine them well enough.”

“Oh, Kalon.” Strauss covered her mouth, exhaustedly. “He’s taking advantage then.”

“He’s not.” She shrunk away from Stauss’s glare. “I can promise you, that he isn’t.”

“Then, he’s marrying you?” She launched to her feet. “Has he asked? Have you spoken about it? Has he even told you he loves you?”

“H-he will!”

“Why should he?” She waved her hands at her in frustration. “What incentive does he have? You just leapt into bed with him, and let him do whatever! He can bolt anytime!” She gripped at her elbows. “And you let him know! You let this… this… stranger know your vulnerabilities, let him defile–.”

“Shut it, Strauss!” Kalon was up on her feet, breathing heavy. “I only just let you in on this. Don’t think you know a thing about it!”

She stormed outside, furiously wiping the tears streaming from her eyes. She stopped to collect herself once the library came into view. She forced a smile and trotted over to meet Innit out front, throwing her arms around him.

“You just saw me yesterday.” He frowned. “Your eyes look red.”

“Must’ve gotten hair in them when Stauss trimmed me.”

“I reckon that could make sense….”

She hugged his arm. “Help me with my rounds?”

“Just for a little.” He toyed with her fingers, keeping his eyes down. “I had something to look into.”

She did not ask for details, simply leading him into the library. She flashed a smile to Gramps as she dragged Innit by. She left him at the top of the stairs as she went to collect her bat, then ushered him off to the second floor.

She stopped wiping down spines with her dusting cloth once they reached a study alcove. She eased up on the desk, letting her boots lightly scrape the wooden floor as she kicked them. Innit had not spoken to her since they entered the library, and now was not looking her way at all. He made passive passes on the covers with his own rag.

“Is something the matter?”

“Just a lot on my mind, I reckon.” He allowed his arm to drop heavily. “I’m goin’ to let you get on with your chores. Reckon the old man will be cool with me campin’ down in the study hall without an escort?”

“Perhaps, but I would need to escort you to him so you could ask.”

“Could come back later….” He rubbed his mouth, musingly. “Ain’t much reason to hang ‘round right now.”

Kalon’s breath caught in her throat. She set her rag aside, clearing her throat loudly to gain his attention. She undid the third button on her cardigan.

“I wouldn’t say you have no reason to be here….”

“Well….” His eyes lingered before he tore them away to glance out from the alcove. “Can’t say it ain’t mighty temptin’.... I don’t know if I’m up for it. My mind just ain’t stoppin’ wanderin’.”

She grabbed his shirt, pulling him forward. She guided him down for a kiss, raking her painted nails over his head and across the back of his neck as he eagerly obliged. She turned her face, biting her lip. She squeezed her eyes shut as his fingers undid the rest of her cardigan.

“Stop!” She shoved him back. “Stop it!”

“What?” He looked around wildly. “What happened? Someone creep up on us?”

Kalon wiped the tears rapidly falling from her eyes, shaking her head.

His brow knitted. “Kalon, you all right?”

She nodded frantically. A whimper escaped her lips when she tried to verbalize that she was fine. She jumped, jolting straight at the touch on her chest, and crying anew when she saw it was Innit rebuttoning her sweater. He adamantly avoided eye contact.

“Am I practice?”

“Practice for what?” He held her shoulders, assessing the completely buttoned sweater, and still avoiding her gaze. “That’ll do it.”

“Do you like sleeping with me?”

Innit tensed and stepped back. “That sounds like a trap….”

“It’s not. I’m only asking because you never said so.”

He eyed her warily. “Thought it was plain as day. What’s with the questions? You ain’t actin’ like yourself.”

She shook her head, rubbing her forehead and biting her lip to stop the tears from coming back. She lunged for him as he tried to move even further away, snagging his shirt with both hands.

“Innit….”

He paused, inched nearer. He stroked her cheek, and kissed her.

“I’ll come back tonight. I really do got some stuff to look into. And, you….” He trailed off awkwardly. “Later. Okay?”

She did not answer more than bobbling her head. She did not trust to keep from sobbing.

---

The cardigan was discarded and replaced with a heavy, leather corset over what would have been a billowy tunic otherwise. She opted for the loosest to assure the top of her reddish bruise peek out; a reminder for Innit to look at. The tulle skirt she had worn she replaced with skin-tight pleather pants that had the other hem restitched with bright pink.

Kalon held her breath as she pulled the zipper up, exhaling once it reached the top. She flattened her hands on her stomach.

“Kalon! Vern says that boy is here again!”

She scrambled her hands over her vanity, hearing the knock on her door and the creak of it opening.

Grams looked her over, looked over at the outfit she had changed from. She pointed at the spiked choker in Kalon’s hands.

“Quite the accessory for a dinner date.”

“I doubt this is a date.”

Grams eyed her corsetline. “Really? Then, my suggestion is to wear it. Now, hurry or Vern will get cross.”

Kalon hastily fastened the choker on as she headed past Grams out of her room. Her ears picked up every heavy step of her spiked boots as she crossed through the library to the entrance.

The furrow on Gramps’s brow showed Kalon had taken too long. His unwelcoming stance coupled with his hand resting on his holstered pistol kept Innit hovering with a foot out the door.

“Ah, here she is. Off to eat, my dear?” Gramps looked pointedly at Innit. “Does your work allow you pocket money enough for a meal, or does my granddaughter need extra?”

“Bye, Gramps.” Kalon grabbed Innit’s arm and dragged him off. “Back in a bit!”

“I'm startin’ to reckon he don't think much of me….” Innit stuffed his hands in his pockets. “I can pay. I still got some money left.” He squirmed. “I ain't ever been to a restaurant. This ain't one of those places you see in magazines with crystal and gold forks, right?”

“Gold forks? What kind of magazine was this?”

“Some bridal thing. Can’t say what it was called with the cover missin’.”

Kalon’s heart leapt. She pried Innit’s hand from his pocket, lacing her fingers with his and leaning up against him. He pulled his arm away, wrapping it around her shoulders to give her an easier way to snuggle up to his side.

He flinched. “Forgot how pointy that necklace was.”

“I didn't mean to put it on.” She fingered a sharp spike. “Grams caught me holding it, and I panicked.”

“Here I was reckonin’ you were mad at me.”

“No, no, of course not! I just….”

She was aware of the tightness of her pants and heaviness of her corset. There was a threatening way her heels cracked against the stone walking path.

She broke from under his arm, briskly going to the corner where the path diverged. “All the cheapest, tastiest places are down this way. Come on, hurry it up. I'm starved!”

Kalon slowed her pace as she studied the awnings that separated the eateries from the rest of the identical, blanched stone buildings. The usual cafes for a quick bread were ruled out. The atmosphere needed more romance, but not to the point that Innit would start studying the forks to gauge what metal they were.

She chose a small eatery with spiced, buttery smells rolling out of the large, open windows. The tablecloths being a pale green–some with bleach stains–gave her a good feeling on the prices.

Innit looked around as they took their seats. “Seems crowded for such a small place.”

“But it’s quite quaint.” Kalon looked over her shoulder. “I believe it’s connected to the bunkhouse above. Some of the crowd must be guests coming and going.”

“Bunkhouse? Like a motel? Maybe I’ll check the prices.”

She smirked. “Is that so?”

“It’s closer to the library. I wouldn’t need to walk as far–.” He tinted red. “I meant for the next time I’m in town! For sleepin’. At night. After the hangin’ out.” He grabbed a menu. “They just list the food, right?”

She took her own menu, gazing over the top. She nudged his ankle with her toes, looking away as he shot her an accusatory glance.

The server bubblingly addressing them as sweethearts threw Innit off, so Kalon ordered for them. She felt his leg bouncing beneath the table, aware his eyes were slowly taking in each surrounding table. She rested her chin on her hand to hide her growing smile.

“You’re particularly handsome this evening.”

Innit jolted. “I’m…. Thanks?” He tugged at his worn shirt. “I-I didn’t change or anything….” He cleared his throat. “You too.” His eyes widened in horror. “Pretty. I meant you’re pretty. And I like those pants.”

“Really?” She pressed her hand to the tight pleather cutting into her stomach. “I thought you hated these?”

“Nah, I like watchin’ you walk ‘round in them. They’re just a pain to get off.” Innit shot a squirrely look at their server. “At least when I wear them.”

The server widened his eyes as if he had seen too much, lowering their food in front of them. He gave them a stiff smile, a nod, and hurried off with the air of needing to divulge a scandal.

Innit groaned into his hands. “All these townies’ll think I wear your clothes.”

She nudged his shin with her toe. “It was chivalrous.”

“Or now all y’all’ll reckon we’ve got a fetish and made it worse.” He leaned back in his chair with a sigh. “We ain’t exactly discreet as is. That waiter picked up we have something goin’ on, and I ain’t ever seen him before.”

“You’re worrying too much.” She picked up her tea, holding it to her lips. “I dare say we won’t have to worry so much longer. Give them other things to talk about if they are talking at all. Which, I still doubt.”

“What sort of thing–?”

Kalon spit her tea onto the floor, coughing. She muttered apologies to Innit as he smacked her back wild-eyed, and muttered more to the server cleaning up.

“Ginger.” Kalon wiped her mouth. “I ordered ginger tea. That was chamomile. I can’t drink that.” She slumped against her chair, taking deep breaths. “Just water. Please.”

Innit eased back into his seat. His blue eyes were still wild, now darting around the restaurant, patrons, and table as if searching for anyone or anything that could cause harm, but not knowing what type of harm to expect.

Kalon urged him to eat, and sold the point by starting on her own food. She stared unseeingly at the plate on the table, munching. Fragments swirled in her head; licorice contains glycyrrhizin, chamomile is best avoided, canned fish shown to have high mercury, strenuous activities can be dangerous, listen to classical music.

“Kalon!”

She jumped, smiling apologetically. Innit’s tone suggested he had tried several times to engage her, and the knitting of his brow showed each failed attempt caused more fret.

“You ain’t actin’ normal. Did something happen?”

“I fought with my friend.” 

She swallowed at the quickness she blurted that out. It did bother her when she thought on it, which she had been trying not to do since scaring Innit off earlier that day. She had never had more than a mild argument with Strauss, always on something meaningless in the end. Innit–and everything that went along with him–were not meaningless.

“Friends fight. Don't worry too much on it.”

“Do you and Khoa fight often?”

He gave her a perplexed stare. “Me and Khoa ain't friends, but, yeah, I reckon we do.”

“Strauss and I don’t fight. We have disagreements on things, but nothing like this.” She brushed the mark on her chest. “She saw this, and… I told her we’ve been intimate.”

Innit choked on his salad. “Why? Couldn’t you’ve lied, or something?”

Kalon pulled her loose top in an attempt to hide the bruise. Her hand shook. She bit her lip as her eyes stung.

“I-I told her, in few words, about what happened when I was a girl….”

His agitation ebbed, minus the leg bouncing that she could feel under the table. He lightly touched her hand, encouraging her to drop her fork to take his.

“I reckon it shocked her.” He rubbed her fingers gently. “It’ll be all right.”

“Have you ever told anyone?”

“Branch and Magpie. But, I reckon Magpie figured out something was wrong with me long before that.” Innit grimaced. “He’s got good eyes.” He gave her hand a squeeze before returning to his food. “Your friend ain’t as psychotic as mine were. It’ll be fine.”

“I didn’t tell her we had… similarities. I merely told her what happened to me–more or less–and that we’ve been–.”

“Ssh! Don’t need all y’all knowin’ what we get up to. Your grandpa carries a gun.”

She laughed lightly, going back to her food. She chased a crouton around. Innit was once more silent; his own eyes burning a hole through his bowl.

“Are you upset I told Strauss?”

“What?” He looked up with a start. “No.” He shrugged, returning to the remains of his food. “Reckon your judgement is good. If you think tellin’ her was right, it probably is.”

“Even telling her about us? Have you told anyone?”

He snorted. “Like who?”

“Khoa. Actually, no, that wouldn’t be wise.” She sucked on the end of her fork. “And Branch is too young….”

Innit scratched his fork across a soggy piece of lettuce. “The only person I might’ve said anything to, I can never talk to again.”

Kalon’s chest ached as she watched him return to being subdued. She would need to speak to Strauss tomorrow, even if she was still upset with her. It was unlikely either of them would die in the night, but she could not leave things how they were for long.

The last couple of months had made it easy for her to forget how Innit looked when they first met. He never spoke more than a few fragments here and there about his friend, and never about what it was like to lose him. All her whining about an argument with hers would have dredged up memories.

Kalon kept a polite smile on her face as their server wandered off with their dishes to fetch the bill. She let it drop at Innit’s picking of the table cloth.

“I don't believe you ever mentioned where it was you were staying? In town, yes? Surely not at Bex's.”

“Definitely not.”

Her heart jumped as he started fishing in his pocket. She frowned as he pulled out paper bills. She took off her spiked choker, muttering about the tightness and fiddling with it. She had done an excellent job of destroying the mood. She may have been able to salvage it after her panic if she had not blurted about her fight with Strauss.

She led him away from the eateries the opposite direction. The road ended at a large concrete clearing set before a massive building made up of long rectangles, those built by white bricks and capped with a dark, slate roof. The clearing was dimly lit by simple lamps made of glass and iron. There was a faint smell of earth from the cracks beneath their feet, showing that the concrete was made up of tiles that now had nature attempting to spring through.

“What is this place?”

“The palace.” Kalon snaked her arm with his. “Lovely, isn’t it? There’s a whole committee of residents that take care of it. Well, the outside. I’m told the inside has long been looted.”

She leaned against him, resting her head on his shoulder as she watched the warm, lantern glow. There was a stiffness in his torso that had not been there during other outings. They were alone, so it had nothing to do with eyes upon them. She rubbed the ring finger of his left hand.

“Is something the matter?” She frowned as he stared into the night sky. “You seem preoccupied. You were distracted at the library earlier too.”

“Just got a lot on my mind.”

She felt his cheek. “You do look tired. Your mind must be keeping you up at night.”

He smiled weakly.

She took a longer route away from the palace, pausing outside the ruins of a cathedral and again at a natural rock formation dripping crisp water. She hesitated as the road forked; turn right and they would arrive outside the library complex, while left would delay this. There was nothing immediately to the left that would spark romantic notions. There was nothing of particular interest except the roundabout, but dragging Innit to gawk at an intersection was too desperate, and she had surpassed her limit in heels some time back.

“Uh, Kalon? You ain’t lost, are you?”

“Pardon?” She forced a laugh. “I live here.”

“Okay, okay, no need to get all defensive.” He pointed to the left. “I can just make out the traffic circle clearin’. I know how to get to my motel from there, and know how to get to the library from there.”

She glanced right, and took his hand. “Lead on.”

The walk was silent and mildly uncomfortable. Kalon was increasingly aware of the pain in her feet, the tightness of her pants cutting into her abdomen. She tried to be discrete as she tugged the waist and hold Innit’s hand, but there was little way he would not have noticed. Her heart kept skipping as she tried not to think of how she was ruining the moment once more.

Strauss called her practice, but she did not understand the connection she and Innit had. She would prove her wrong tomorrow when she went to apologize. She could admit her friend was worried, thank her for that worry, and then share her news.

“This is it.”

They stood outside a blanched brick and cobbled path building attached to several others. A sign was welded to the iron gate that separated the grounds from the narrow street: Turgot Rue Hotel.

“You’re so close.”

“You recognize where you are now?”

“If I’m honest, I did from the start.” She wrapped her arms around his neck. “I wanted to walk with you longer.”

He rested his hands on her hips, but the smile on his lips faltered. He lowered his eyes, his shoulders slumping.

“Kalon…. I got something important to say.”

Her heart fluttered, and she pulled him into a kiss.

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Now the territory of 'what-if' but don't go too deeply and also 'character study' but also not that deep. Because of how they were abused, Kalon and Innit both wouldn't have the healthiest view/relationship/judgement with sex. Kalon for certain does go off, marry, have kids, ect. so there would be some differences in if it was some unknown guy verses if it was Innit, but either way the deciding to follow the passion would be a big deal, the letting someone get that close would be a big deal, but because I'm not going too deep, the moments leading up to that (Kalon would freak out and balk, not just go with it) I didn't include. Partly because the conversations are very different if random or if Innit, and I don't want to get attatched to either one. And all this goes for Innit too. Deciding it would be okay--or just getting too carried away to worry about everything might be more likely, lol--would be a huge deal, but since it's a 'what-if-ish' I didn't want to get attached to any character development that would happen, because he might not get that still. I'm also being vague with time because it gets jumbled in my head, but I'd say they've known each other six months, if that, and Innit vanished for probably two months or so.

If you think back on the Magpie 'what-if' (his what-if being more the ending part, because let's be real here) Innit tells Maggy in a quick sum-up how his relationship with Kalon came about. I'm also caught up again, but it is heading towards the end at long last.

Oh, and because I completely forgot to do this on the other 5 sections, Kalon has an AI song: Quiet Riot in the Library by WryBongo1833 | Suno

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The watery sun was pleasant but not enough to warm the snowy streets. The cheerfulness of the townies was enough to counter the cold, them greeting each other with a word or flick of the hand. The storefront windows were decorated with garlands and glazed fruits, the reasons long-lost but always a welcomed change from the everyday.

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“I'll rest at the shop. I cannot believe I forgot to buy the roast! Some housewife I'm turning out to be.”

“You, my friend, are being far too hard on yourself.” Kalon leaned over the pram. “Auntie Strauss is much too tough on herself, isn't she, Mal?”

The baby–heavily bundled in shades of blue–stared silently with eyes still an indiscernible dark shade of blue-gray typical of newborns. He was still squished in features, but the way he stared–especially when he screamed–reminded Kalon of a displeased kitten.

“What is of great annoyance, is that you were not anywhere near as big and bumbling at six months.” Strauss stopped, catching her breath. “I do believe you still wore stilettos.”

“I did not! I stopped stilettos by month four, at least.”

“Heeled boots then. The chucky kind.”

“Well… I had no flat shoes at the time, if that is of any consolation.”

“No. No, it is not.” Strauss waved her dismissively. “Come on, can’t stop the momentum.”

Kalon kept her pace slow, glancing from Strauss to the pram to check on her companions. She squinted into the weak sun a moment.

“What time do you think it is?”

“Need to get back?”

“Not immediately, surely, but eventually. Gramps’s back is bothering him again. I’m holding the place down, and we’ve been so busy recently.”

“I bet it has to do with the rumors.” Strauss laughed at Kalon’s perplexed face. “Honestly. You curate history and yet you never know what people are whispering about.” She smiled into the pram. “Though, you’ve the best excuse for the last couple of weeks. Ah, the butcher! Oh, the crowd….”

“We’ll wait out here. It’ll be faster for you. And easier should I need to rush to work.”

She watched as Strauss tried to use her state to get near the counter, failing as elderly women blocked her path. She braced against a gust of wind and re-tucked one of the blankets around the baby. She tapped the window, gained her friend’s attention, and pointed down the road before giving her a small, departing wave.

The probability of some rumor being the driving force behind the recent crowds at the library was likely. Grams had started taking meals in her office.

“See? Told you the Gousa granddaughter was pregnant.”

Kalon halted, gripping tight to the pram. She inched backwards into the nearest doorway. There was a short pause, then–.

“And Pistachio didn’t shove her down the stairs? That’s the bigger shock of it.”

Two old women–Grams and Gramps’s generation–were slowly shuffling down the sidewalk towards her and Mal. They were wrapped in woolen coats and shawls, carrying cloth shopping bags on their arms.

“So true! It isn’t so unusual given how they let her run wild. Do you remember what she used to look like? Bits of metal shoved through her eyebrow. Dressing like a little tramp.”

Kalon’s shaking hand went to where she had worn her eyebrow bar. It had been more than a year since she put it in, growing bored with the ritual around the time she first met Innit. Khoa showing up bangaged as he had then may have influenced her a bit too. She had caught her bar on her own clothing occasionally.

“It’s no wonder they had no contact until they needed to. Wouldn’t be shocking if she was sent to them to straighten out and her orphanage was just coincidental.”

“Not that it worked. Poor, little infant. Imagine growing up knowing your mother was no better than a common–.”

The two elders caught sight of her and the pram nestled in the doorway. They regarded her, gave a nod at the pram, and shuffled on. Their voices now lowered in a hiss.

“Think she overheard?”

She bit her lip to stop it shaking. She put on a smile for Mal–him staring soundlessly up at her still–and wiped her eyes.

“Sorry, Mal. Mummy needs….”

She crouched down, stifling a sudden sob that burst from her mouth. She breathed in through her nose and out through her mouth in long, practiced breaths until the overwhelming, suffocating weight in her chest subsided. She climbed back to her feet with a final huff, wiped her eyes, and gave Mal a more genuine smile.

“Sorry. Grams said I’d have moments. I suppose that was one.” She peered into the sun. “I should learn to wear a watch.” She began walking. “I never was one for bracelets. Isn’t that odd? Necklaces and earrings, but not bracelets and rings.” She laughed at Mal’s disgruntled expression. “I promise you that I’m not mad. Crazy, as your father would say.”

They were near the library when Kalon remembered she needed another packet of diapers. She ducked her head in an attempt to conceal herself from the small crowd waiting outside the library door, rushing by to go to the corner shop.

She whispered apologizes to Mal as she repeatedly slammed the pram in the sides of the narrow door in her hurry to get out of the cold. She smiled warmly at the proprietor, receiving a curt nod and a side-eye. She hissed at the time on the clock, and brisky headed for the baby section.

“Gramps is going to be cross at me for opening late.” She tucked a pack of diapers beneath the pram. “We probably shouldn’t have gone with Auntie Strauss this morning. C’est la vie.” Her head swiveled. “Was there anything else? Pens? Wipes?”

She tossed wipes with the diapers. She glanced at the clock, gulped, and headed for the counter. Anything else would need to wait.

She jerked the pram to a stop to avoid smacking into the young man waiting at the counter. The suddeness jostled Mal from his soundless, staring stupor. His face smushed up, reddened, and his mouth opened–huffing in preparation to wail.

“No, no, no, shush.” Kalon leaned into the pram, patting his cheek lightly. “I’m sorry. I’m sorry. That was too fast. Shh.”

“Library girl?”

Her green eyes widened. She straightened, feeling a cold jolt down her spine as she faced a pair of odd eyes–hazel and brown. Her grip on the pram tightened when those eyes momentarily darted to Mal.

She grimaced. “Honestly, Khoa, how do you not remember my name?”

“It’s Kalon.” He shrugged. “Library girl is how I remember you. Just came out.”

Her grip loosened. He was not trying to pick a fight. There was a tiredness to him, but one that lacked irritability. Other than the small look that showed he saw Mal existed, he appeared disinterested and was not acting any differently towards her.

“Have you come to use the library? Is Bex cooking up something? I do believe it has been at least a year–.”

“I’m alone.”

There was no further explanation, and no confirmation if he was there to visit the library or just passing through town. She rocked on her toes, chewing at her questions, stealing looks at the clock and at Khoa’s face. He was thinner. Or her memories of him were not accurate.

“So sorry for the wait, sir.” The proprietor returned from the backroom with a small, glass jar. “Smelling salts are not a commonly recommended item. It took me some effort to locate them.”

Kalon eyed the jar, cocking her head. “Are they for your first aid kit?”

Khoa smirked at her as he silently handed over payment. He backed away, ignoring the proprietor’s thanks, and headed for the door.

“Good morning.” She placed the diapers and wipes on the counter. “Have you been very busy today?”

She tightened her grip on the pram once again at the coldness the proprietor stared at her with. She fished out currency to busy her hands, cooing to Mal who was back to his mild disgruntled expression but still with extra shine in his eyes.

“I was three years ahead of your father in school.”

“My–? Oh, is that so?” She forced a smile. “Did you know him well?”

“Enough to know how ashamed he’d be.” The proprietor snatched the currency away. “Have a good day, Miss Gousa.”

Her chest tightened as the overwhelmed feeling surged. She backed away from the counter, and forced the pram through the door, jostling and upsetting Mal. She tried apologizing, choking on her sobs. She pushed the pram quicker until she was jogging with it, tears streaming down her face and Mal screaming from inside.

Khoa leapt aside on the sidewalk. “What the–? Kalon? Where are–?”

She blubbered something at him–she could not say what or if it made any sense–as she ran by him. She cleared the crowd outside the library easily with the pram and shrieking baby. She pulled him from it once safely inside the library, abandoning the pram in the entryway.

She carried Mal down into the dwelling beneath the library. Her tears had stopped, now just stains on her face. She shushed the baby repeatedly as they took a chair in the living room. She hugged him to her chest, catching her breath.

“What is all this crying?” Grams popped out of her workspace. “Did you leave the patrons alone?”

“I… I didn’t….” She squeezed her eyes shut to stop new tears. “I’m s-sorry.”

Grams heaved a sigh, giving her a thump on the back. “Get a hold of yourself, girl. I know it is not fun in the least, but you still have work to do.” She gave her another pat. “Feed the baby, and then go open. You’ll both have quieted then.”

“O-okay. Th-thanks–.”

“And do not come back until at least lunch. I’ve too much work, and heaven knows Vern will try leaving that bed if you keep disturbing him. Understood, my dear?” She pointed a gnarled finger at Mal. “Behave for your mother.”

She took a breath, and gathered her cover to nurse Mal. She whispered and cooed at him while he ate, lulling him to calm and then to sleep. She placed him in his bassinet outside her door–her room too cramped to fit it. She hung a walkie-talkie with the ‘talk’ taped down over the bassinet, clipped the pair to her hip, and headed up.

The visitors filed in, murmuring annoyance at the wait. She waved them through with her bat, just to remind them of the consequences should they break the rules. She barely glanced at any of them, yawning and staring blankly with her bat-less hand on the walkie-talkie.

“You left these.”

Kalon started, blinking the tiredness from her eyes. It took a moment to piece together that Khoa was standing there holding the package of diapers and wipes.

“Oh. Yes. Thank you.” She laughed shakily. “I was in such a rush to open–.”

“Sure, because forgettin’ to grab the only thing on the counter is believable.” He deposited the items into her arms. “Goin’ off the blues… it’s a boy?”

She nodded, swallowing. “Yes. Malvern. Mal for short.”

“Is he Innit’s?”

The paper packaging audibly crinkled as she tightened her hold on the diapers. Her eyes darted to a pair entering, her ears catching hisses of whispers. The tightness returned to her chest, and her eyes prickled.

“Innit's? Of course not!” She forced a joyless laugh. “Haven't you heard? I'm the town whore. He could be anyone's.”

Khoa’s face was blank. “You ain't a whore.” He gave her a mirthless smirk. “You had, what, three guys?”

“...Two.”

Khoa laughed. “Yeah, I'm the whore of us standin’ here.” His eyes sharpened. “You can’t let them eat at you.”

Kalon stepped back, gulping at the lump in her throat. The surge of gratitude rose in her chest. She sniffed heartily, laughing at Khoa’s mildly disgusted expression.

“Apologies.” She clumsily wiped her eyes. “Why are you being so kind? It’s… well, unusual.”

“My mom let it eat at her.” He rubbed a shiny, reddish scar marring his palm. “I paid for it.”

She quickly studied the paper packaging of the diapers as his eyes went her way. She searched for what to say, but fragments of what that scar could mean–burned, reaction to a corrosive cut, disease–flit through her mind instead.

“Does Innit know?”

She huffed irritability. “I've already said that Mal isn't–.”

“I don't know why you're protectin’ him.” Khoa crossed his arms. “Or, maybe what I should ask is did you know the last time you saw him?”

She kept her eyes on her items, picking at the corner of the seal keeping the wipes enclosed with a turquoise nail. Her posture relaxed as Khoa leaned away.

“I give you credit for not trappin’ him.” He scratched at his jet hair. “He could’ve ended up walkin’ out on you both if you did. And then he’d just be ordinary scum instead of in the dark about all this.”

Her heart sank. “You… you believe he would’ve left me regardless?”

“Dice did a number on him. Can’t underestimate that level of survivor guilt.”

“You don’t call him Arios…? You didn’t know him, did you?”

“Briefly.” Khoa shrugged. “I ain't got much to say on him except that his glarin’ issue was he overestimated his friends. He should’ve figured in that they’d go nuts if he screwed off and died.”

The abrupt, deafening cry that blasted from her hip–Khoa and she both startling–dashed any follow up questions she dared ask. She frantically tried lowering the volume and juggling her items as she dashed for the door leading to the subterranean dwelling.

She released her arms, dropping everything onto a chair, and scooped Mal up.

“Ssh, Mal, I've got you. Are you wet? Hungry?”

Grams approached with her hands wrapped around a steaming mug of tea. “Change him and take him up with you. You can’t let the visitors alone long.”

“Surely they won’t miss me for twenty minutes or so? They’re so absorbed–.”

“The chances of vandals are high.” She peered grimly as she raised the cup. “The most prevalent rumor is that the Foxcroft granddaughter is pregnant. The officials in Paris Colony are being oddly silent on it; more likelihood of it being true but it being too early for the announcement.”

She grabbed the shawl draped over the chair she typically fed Mal in, and hurried back to the stairs. She nearly collided with Khoa at the top.

He held up the wipes, irritability. “You dropped this.”

She snatched them and tossed them down the stairs. She brushed by Khoa, clutching Mal to her chest–him still whimpering over the lack of food.

“Is there a topic of interest to you, Khoa? I won’t charge a fee. As thanks for bringing me my belongings.”

“The info here… is better than the stuff on the ‘net?”

“Of course. That is often scrubbed, definitions changed, whole events or topics deleted.” She gestured to the walls upon walls of shelves. “This is tangible and forever. Well, so long as I stop people from stealing and destroying books.”

“Does this gratitude carry to the next time I’m in town?”

“No.”

“Fine.” He glanced away. “Whatever you’ve got on that immunodeficiency virus. Or any news about cures if I got to be specific. More recent the better.”

Kalon looked him over, slowly tightening her hold on Mal. Her lack of subtly was noted by way of Khoa bristling; his expression turning cagey.

“Does Innit…?”

“Know?” Khoa clicked his tongue. “Of course he knows.”

“No, no, does he… have it?” Her lip shook. “Is Mal sick? Babies do poorly with such things.”

Khoa glared. “Oh, so now he’s Innit’s?” He rolled his eyes. “You think Innit would do that? That he’d say nothing after sleepin’ with you? Or, hell, before? Wouldn't you've realized something ain't right already?”

“Khoa, please!” Her eyes prickled. “I don’t care if my asking is irrational, I’m asking!”

“No, he ain’t got it.” He grimaced. “I was the only one lucky enough.” He folded his arms. “Is that enough background info to get me these books?”

She reddened. “Yes, of course.” She hesitated. “How long–?”

“Seriously?”

She smiled sheepishly and shuffled off. She stroked Mal's fuzzy head, sucking in her relieved sobs. She draped her cover over herself and Mal so that she could feed him on the go, and set about to find Khoa his request as well as tend to the others.

---

Gramps was still down with back spasms the following morning. The crowd was as thick as before. Kalon opted to wear Mal in a sling rather than put him in his bed. The frenzy over this bit of gossip was palpable, and she would not risk vandals using her disappearing to tend to Mal to commit their crimes.

She forced a welcoming smile for the umpteenth time as the door was pushed open, allowing it to drop when she spotted Khoa. She gave him a puzzled frown.

“Back again?”

“I need a dictionary for all that you gave me yesterday.” He held out a fold of paper currency. “Whatever this’ll cover. It ain’t much, I know.”

“I’ll stretch it as need be if you hold Mal a moment or two when I need him off me.”

“I ain’t holdin’ your baby.”

“Please, Khoa, I’m not comfortable climbing the ladders with him yet. It’s not as if I can pass him to anyone else.”

He gave a disgruntled groan. “Fine.”

“Perfect!” She removed Mal from her baby-sling. “Just, hold him so.”

“Wait, now?”

“Support his head” She clamped Khoa’s arms around Mal. “That’ll do. Back in a jiff.” She skittered to a stop. “Just… don’t move. You’ll act as doorman too.”

“Kalon, wait a–.”

“I know exactly where the right reference is. No time at all. I swear.”

She was confident she heard Khoa make a curse at her as she hurried away. She hoped it was something Mal would not be able to remember, or else risk him repeating it at a much later date.

She was distracted from completing Khoa’s request several times on her way by others wanting an additional tome. She sped-walked back towards the entrance with a medical dictionary for the everyman firmly against her chest. Her heart blipped as Mal screeched; it reverberated off the ceiling.

She snickered. “Poor, Khoa.” She quickened her pace at another screech, her heart again jumping. “Poor, Mal.” She broke into a run as an angry buzz joined the next shriek. “Mal!”

A tall man was bearing down on Khoa with great agitation. He swiveled side to side, wanting to go around, but Khoa’s raised hackles caused pause. There were papers clearly sticking from his pockets and he carried three books under his arm.

Four more men hovered on the edges, standing on their toes, waiting for a chance to run through the doors.

“--big shove, and that’ll be it.” The tall man inched nearer. “You won’t be able to stop all of us and hold onto that screaming thing.”

Kalon pulled her retractable baton off her belt, still running full speed. She flicked it to extend, and whacked the tall man across the back. Across the backs of his knees. Again across his back now that he was down. Again. Again. Her heart was racing; Mal was still screaming.

“Kalon!” Khoa caught her wrist as she swung again. “Take your kid!”

She hastily pulled Mal into her, dropping her baton to shush and cradle him. He was quick to quiet–missing the familiarity of Kalon–which settled her nerves too. She went to apologize to Khoa, or joke about Mal’s tantrum, or further reprimand the vandal; whichever did not get the chance to form and the blood drained from her face.

The would-be vandal was attempting to stand, gasping in pain as he clutched his leg. Blood gushed from his bent nose, him spitting whenever too much fell into his mouth.

The state of him was not what caused Kalon dread. It was how Khoa stood bearing down over him with his knuckles white on the baton. There was a flush to his face and a burning glint in his sharp eyes.

Kalon laughed shakily, her hold on Mal tight. “Thanks, Khoa. I suspect the anti-theft message–.”

She jumped as Khoa cracked the baton across the vandal’s neck. Her green eyes searched the still body, heart thumping and breathing shallow. 

Khoa’s expression was cold. His eyes darted to the other would-be vandals hovering in the corners. He rolled the one at his feet over with his foot, eliciting a sharp cry. His grip tightened on the baton. He reeled back his arm.

“Khoa!” She exhaled as he lowered his arm. “I’ll handle it from here. Your requested–.”

He dropped the baton, backed away, and rushed out the entrance.

She retrieved her baton, casting a steely look to those hovering. “Your mistake was thinking my baton would not hurt as much as my bat.” She adjusted Mal. “Set the books on that table, and be gone when I return.” She sneered at the man at her feet. “Take him too, or you’ll all face my grandfather’s pistol.”

She hurried outside, stopping just as quickly to stop from colliding into Khoa.

“I expected you to be long gone.” She shuffled closer. “I dropped the book you–.”

“It ain’t important.”

“Are you okay?”

Khoa nodded, keeping his eyes down. “Innit thinks he’s got all this darkness, thinks he’d go down any road to do what he needs…." He touched the tear-like scar from where he once had his lip piercing. "He’s got no clue that he followed Dice out into the light long ago without realizin’ it.” He took a breath. “You want me to tell Innit about the baby?”

She stroked Mal’s fuzzy head, running her finger down to his button nose. Her eyes prickled as a lump formed in her throat. She gave a small shake of her head.

“Mal deserves much more than what I can give on my own… but….”

“Innit won’t  go back into the dark. I won’t let him.” He rubbed Mal’s hand with his thumb. “I might never see you again.” He stared at Kalon. “I think you’ll be fine.”

“You should check in just to be sure.”

Khoa snorted, smiled weakly, and disappeared down the street.

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Finally! This took forever. The end is in sight at last. Some notes: the paper packaging for the diapers is because the ones I use are packaged in paper. I figured eventually, all diapers would follow the European model and do paper packaging. (And this does take place in Europe anyway.)

Khoa was always a single mom kid. Back in 2017ish when I was filling in the gaps with Innit's background via Khoa, I had to figure out the dynamic of the four boys. Clover, Innit, and Novie had the standard married parents that abandoned them. Khoa was he single parent. I never fully figured out if Novie was orphaned very young and abandoned by an aunt and uncle, or if he was just the youngest of his parents' children so "off loaded". He was the only one with siblings though either way, and was dumped because he was the youngest. But, yeah, when I remembered Khoa was from a single mom I was like 'oh he's going to have feelings about this'.

Kalon being emotional and a bit irrational is because hormones suck, lol. Sometimes you'd just start crying and then (in my case) you sit there like... okay, why'd I do that?

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The Outlier
Chapter 9

A man glanced up as the front door creaked open. He took one look at the pair of silhouettes and turned back to the stark white glow of a computer screen. “We closed thirty minutes ago,” he called out with annoyance weighing heavily on his voice.

“We need a flight off-planet.”

The man straightened up in his chair, peering between his screen and the divider used to separate his side of the desk from the public-facing side. His ruddy complexion darkened the further it moved from the glow of the screen.

The first of the two men stepped through the shallow lobby and approached the desk. The muted lights above his head cast his sepia skin with a dull glow, and his dark brown eyes seemed even darker in the shadow under his brow. The dark leather jacket he wore seemed to soak in the shadows of the room.

Behind him, a wiry man with mostly tan hair brushed aside the patch of white from his forehead. A black headband held back the rest, and a thick knitted scarf wrapped around his neck above a bleach-stained gray shirt.

“Off-planet?” The man repeated as the dark-eyed visitor casually rested a hand on his desk.

“We know you were the pilot who shuttled New Arden’s officers across a couple planets not too long ago,” Elliot casually slipped his other hand into his jacket pocket.

The pilot narrowed his eyes skeptically. “Who told you that?”

“Name another pilot in the tri-city region who still has aircraft able to go into space.”

The pilot shifted uncomfortably in his brown uniform. “Sir, I hope you can understand I can neither confirm nor deny that I, a humble transport pilot of Harbour Shipping, would shuttle New Arden’s officers—”

“Humble or not,” Elliot tried.

“Listen–it was a job–I was hired out! I swear–”

“We’re not here to get anyone in trouble.” Elliot eased with a quick wave of his hand. “We just need to go back to one of your stops.”

The pilot blinked. “Oh.”

Elliot’s brows raised in anticipation. “So?”

“All right, all right,” it was the pilot’s turn to wave his hands. “Which stop were you looking at?”

“The Tallelands.” Ace stepped up to the desk.

“Tallelands,” the pilot’s fingers pattered across his keyboard. “On the planet Tal E. Yeah, I was there a few weeks ago. Country of Northaven, looks like.”

“That’s it.” Ace’s eyes lit with hope.

The pilot glanced up from the computer. In the beam of light above their heads, the thin man’s streak of white hair seemed to glow. “Say,” he asked curiously, “you’re not one of those Aravast folks, are you?”

“No, I’m a Daethen from Northaven, hence why I need to get back there.” Ace said matter-of-factly.

“Oh!” He exclaimed as he leaned back in his chair. “Wow, I was wondering what they were doing picking up a bunch of people like that. They didn’t tell me much, just where to go and when to do it.” His ruddy face paled. “I mean... I didn’t say anything about picking up anybody. Nothing at all.”

“I got it,” Ace shrugged. “They were trying to see if I could help them, but it didn’t work out.” 

“Sorry to hear that.”

“I’m not.” Ace smirked.

“So, when can you fly?” Elliot asked.

“When can you pay me?”

Elliot reached into his back pocket and handed him a small card. 

“A cash card? I didn’t think cards still existed without a name attached to them.” 

“It was a birthday present. My grandmother was old-school.”

The pilot swiped it through a machine and nodded. “Nice birthday present. Now, I’ll need to scan your chip.”

Ace promptly backed away when the man stood and reached for his neck.

“What, you think you can just fly off without being scanned? It’s standard protocol to track all off-planet passengers!”

Elliot’s annoyance turned to silent dread as the pilot waved the scanner in front of them.

“Oh, it’s not that,” Ace recovered and offered reassuringly, “it’s just that I don’t have a chip.”

“Don’t have a chip?” The pilot blinked.

Ace held out his hand for the scanner and, with his back safely pointed away from the pilot, he pressed the scanner onto his own neck. It buzzed out an error. “See? I’m from The Tallelands; we don’t have chips there.” He handed the scanner back.

“Oh!” The pilot gave a short laugh and stepped back behind the computer with the scanner. “My apologies, sir. I guess you’re going off-planet as a chip read error, then.” He then sat back in his chair. “All right, I can probably get the ship up and running in about an hour.”

“Wait, what about him?” Ace pointed to Elliot.

“What about him? This ain’t enough for two tickets.” He lifted Elliot’s card.

Ace and Elliot glanced at each other. Ace had donned a look of worry, and Elliot frowned and pulled him away from the desk. 

“Listen, I don’t need a ticket,” he spoke softly.

“Don’t need a ticket? You’re supposed to come with me!” Ace hissed back.

“You heard him; I don’t have enough money for us both!” He winced and added under his breath, “Besides, I can’t risk being scanned. If they follow me, they’ll be able to find you.”

The Daethen’s brows knitted. “But, you won’t be safe here.”

Elliot put his hand on Ace’s shoulder. “But you will be safe there.”

Ace shook his head, his eyes wide with fearful sorrow. 

The Barean gripped his shoulder tighter. “Now go on. And don’t you dare turn this into another sappy moment.”

Ace was struggling to retain composure. “Elliot.”

“Stop it!” Elliot released Ace with a half-shove. “What did I just say?” His voice cracked.

“I can’t—”

“You can. This is how it has to be.”

His words flickered a light in Ace’s eyes.

Ace rushed back to the counter. “How about this,” he looked hard at the ruddy pilot and he slipped a silver ring from his left ring finger. “You take this for payment, but we don’t scan him.”

“Ace, what in the—”

He shoved his friend back with his other hand, holding the shimmering ring between his fingers. “It’s pure white gold.”

The pilot selected the ring from Ace’s fingers and held it closer to his computer screen for light.

“You cannot give away your wedding ring!” Elliot tugged on Ace’s arm. “Are you insane?”

“If I don’t receive money, I can’t issue a ticket.” The pilot’s eyes were still glued to the ring. 

“See? So, take it back!” Elliot ordered forcefully.

“I can replace a ring,” Ace replied sternly. “I cannot replace a friend.”

Elliot’s mouth hung open, but not a single word could escape from it.

“If I can’t issue a ticket, I don’t have to scan you.” The pilot looked up.

Ace’s brows raised in anticipation. “So?”

“So, both of you just come back here and get on the shuttle.” He shook his head, pocketed the ring, and unlatched the half-door beside him. “I swear, you’d better not be on the run or something,” he muttered with a sigh.

Ace turned to Elliot with a wide grin.

Elliot, however, had not yet recovered. “Why?” He finally managed to get out.

“I told you why. Now, come on.”

He tugged Elliot through the door and followed the pilot through a series of hallways until they reached the hangar. While the pilot barked their last-minute plans to the crew, Ace and Elliot started up the portable staircase into the ship’s cockpit.

Ace bounced into one of the chairs and chuckled as it spun. He looked up to the door, turning his head as the chair slowly rotated below him.

Elliot stood silently in the doorway, almost trancelike as he ran his fingers across the curved shape.

“You can come in.”

Elliot looked up. At last, a smile tugged at his lips. “Forgive me; it’s odd to think I’m actually leaving this place.”

“It does seem a little surreal after basically convincing myself I didn’t have a chance,” Ace leaned his elbows on his knees.

Elliot puffed air through his lips as he sat in an adjacent chair. “It’s not like I’m leaving behind anything important. Just a dead-end job, a shoddy apartment, and old memories.”

“Good ones?” 

“Gershwin’s are the only good ones.”

“But you grew up here,” Ace tried, “you’ve got memories of your family before Gershwin, right?”

Elliot took in a slow, deep breath. “Those are... too buried beneath the scars.” 

“What happened?”

“You’re really going to make me get sappy again?” Elliot sat back in the chair.

“I’ll get it out of you one way or another.” Ace raised an eyebrow.

Elliot’s smirk softened. “When I was fifteen, something happened to the water, and my entire family—and most of our apartment building—got really sick. I was away at school, or I’d have been sick, too,” Elliot’s eyes turned idly out the open door. “I rushed them to the hospital, and they got them into beds and hooked up to monitors, but that’s when NAGI came in. They said due to a greater emergency, they would be unable to care for my family. So, they left them, hooked to the machines, to slowly die before my eyes.”

Ace had frozen, his hand pressed across his lips.

“To this day, I can’t stand thinking they could have been helped, but they weren’t. I can’t stand that I couldn’t do anything about it. And to this day, I can’t stand looking at those beds and machines—as you are well aware from my stupid panic attack.”

“It’s not stupid,” the white hair slid back into Ace’s face.

“And like you, I still wonder if I should have done something differently. Should I have run and grabbed a doctor, or not taken no for an answer, or not been so useless and helpless... It tore me up so bad; I lost everything, including my sanity.”

“And that’s when Gershwin found you.”

Elliot looked up. “…Good job.”

Ace offered an empathetic smile. “I’m really sorry you had to go through that.”

“It’s all past now.” Elliot leaned back in the chair and used his legs to twist it from side to side.

“Well, I hope you can come to make new good memories in The Tallelands now.” Ace leaned over with a smug grin. “Maybe even add a few more names to your two-person friends list.”

“Oh, you still think there’s two, huh?” Elliot ribbed him.

“Oh, sorry, am I being pretentious again?”

Try as he might to hold it back, Elliot broke into a hearty laugh. He held up one hand to shield his eyes and he heavily shoved Ace with the other.

Ace yelped as his chair spun in circles, though he was laughing almost as much.

Elliot hooted an exaggerated sigh. “Have you thought about what your wife and friends are going to think of you and your newfound power?” he asked once Ace’s chair had slowed to a stop. “‘Cause you’re, like, crazy powerful now.”

“They’ll be surprised, that’s for sure. But, I don’t plan on using it much if I can help it. Although technically, there are sorcerers around.” Ace raised a hand and caused mist to rise above his fingertips as the light flowed through the veins of his arm. “I may blend right in.”

“Sorcerers?” Elliot’s brows peaked. “This I gotta see.”

Soon, the pilot joined them in the cockpit, along with two crewmembers to help with the hours of travel ahead of them. In the cover of darkness, from an aircraft hangar twenty miles outside of New Arden, a ship slipped into Barea’s atmosphere and shot into space.

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For the first time in weeks, her eyes were not wet with tears. She had not forgotten, nor would she ever forget, the loss she had experienced, but it was becoming easier to live beyond the icy hole punched through the center of her life. 

She leaned heavily on her brother-in-law’s arm as they walked down the sandy road to her door. She had been grateful to have James and her husband’s longtime friend, Dorian, at her side as they worked their way through their grief together.

“James,” Dorian shouted suddenly, giving his free arm a tug.

James stopped walking and turned to him, but he could only follow Dorian’s line of sight when he couldn’t speak further.

Athena broke from his arm and clamped her hands against her mouth, tears of hope welling in her eyes.

Two figures were walking over the hill towards them.

 

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YAY it ended happily after all!! I was not expecting the cool bro-ness of Ace and Elliot when I first started writing, but I really like it a lot; similar to Ace and Dorian, but its own unique thing. I was glad I could fit Elliot into ToAG just because I hated for this coolness to only exist in this story, ha.

Although... they will both return in the next Star Trek TNG fanfiction I have planned in my brain! 😋 

Thanks for reading!

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The Outlier
Chapter 8

Elliot gnashed his teeth and pulled against his captors. He writhed and wrenched against the ropes that bound him until his skin had rubbed raw. He was repeatedly held back and pushed down, and he finally flopped back to the ground with an exaggerated huff.

He looked over at Ace, emotionlessly slumped over his knees. His wrists were bound by cold, metal shackles. His hair was messy and barely held back in a ponytail from all of the times the guards gawked mockingly at the mark on the back of his neck. To top it off, he now bore a patch of white hair that fell on the right side of his face: yet another sign to prove his Aravasti genetics.

He slowly turned the silver wedding ring around on his finger. Its return had been his final request granted before his public execution.

A makeshift platform had been raised in the middle of New Arden’s city square, and a crowd had thickly gathered around it. The water of the canal formed a backdrop to the scene as the sun ducked in and out of clouds overhead. The dull roar of hundreds of discussions was quieted as a thin man with wavy hair in a navy-blue uniform stepped forward beside five officers. Ace and Elliot sat, bound, at their feet.

“Citizens of New Arden,” Cason announced with his hands raised. “Today is a day we will remember for years to come, and today is a day Echoes will not soon forget.”

The mob offered a smattering of applause and shouts in affirmation.

“Ace,” Elliot managed to shove his friend with his shoulder.

The Outlier, however, continued his trance-like wringing of his fingers.

“Today we take control of their efforts to undermine our people in their skewed desire for revenge. Today, we show Echoes everywhere what we will do to them when they break our rules.”

Cason had scarcely gestured toward Ace when the crowd instantly broke into shouts and yells of anger.

Elliot began to struggle again. “Ace—snap out of it!” He urged.

“And then what?” Ace’s narrow eyes slid toward him under the white and brown hair in his face.

The Barean scowled. “You can’t just give up!”

“What else can I do?” Ace turned, shouting over Cason’ continuing speech and the crowd’s calls in reply. “Try to pretend hundreds of people didn’t just die? Try to pretend I’m not going to join them, leaving behind everyone who’s ever cared about us and will never know what happened to us??” His wedding ring glinted in the sun.

“I know how powerless that feels, but I refuse to believe everything you did yesterday to save my life was done in vain.” He shook his head when Ace continued to ignore him. “I refuse to believe you’re going to sit back and force me to watch you die in front of me—only for me to get killed right after.”

Ace winced and turned away.

Elliot, however, scooted himself closer. “You may not want to believe me, but I know you can do it. I still trust you, Ace.”

The guard pulled him back into place as Ace hung his head. 

“I have no more tools,” he muttered. “No more power. I can do nothing.”

“When has not being able to do something ever stopped you?” The Barean urged, bending around the guard’s leg. “Besides, you still have the power. But, like that butter knife lock pick, you just have to find another way to use it.”

Ace’s eyes opened.

“And here!”

Ace was grasped by the shoulders and drug to the front of the platform. He was heavily dropped back to his knees, but instead of slumping forward, he held his back steady. His once emotionless face was beginning to sharpen with determination.

“This Echo we have called The Outlier has at last been captured.” Cason dramatically grimaced as he looked upon Ace. “Many of you may remember the havoc he dealt on our town days earlier. Since then, he has attempted to murder our very Commander Konstantin—not to mention he has cast a spell over this Barean traitor.”

Cason turned to scowl at Elliot, but he was taken aback by the man’s smug expression.

“By his death, we will send a clear sign to all Echoes,” he turned his eyes back to the crowd, “By his death, we will ensure New Arden’s life!”

A clap of thunder masked the crowd’s joyful cry and caused all eyes to turn to the sky.

“Well,” Cason attempted a smile, “I suppose we should get to the point quickly. General?”

The general, armed with a long rifle, stepped forward. He coldly pointed the barrel at the back of Ace’s neck. He paused and then used the barrel to sweep Ace’s hair aside. His eyes grew wide.

Cason’s eyes narrowed, and then he noticed the raindrops in the air.

They were not falling.

Behind him, the crowd had grown uncharacteristically quiet. They, too, had donned a variety of fearful expressions. Some had even begun to run away.

He looked down at Ace.

The Outlier’s eyes were coated in blue light. Glowing streams pulsed from the shining mark on the back of his neck, tracing through his hair, across his face, and down his neck. Despite the shackles blocking the path of his power to his fingers, he had found a way around them.

Screams urged Cason to raise his eyes and witness the water rising from the canal at their backs and swirling into the clouds above. He grit his teeth in an expression encompassing apprehension, amazement, and outrage.

“Shoot him!!” He barked, attempting to grab the gun from the stunned general’s hands. “Shoot him now!!”

But in a mighty crash of thunder, the wall of water and every raindrop burst through the air and collapsed heavily on the platform. Torrential waves crashed through the street and lapped against rooftops. The force broke through windows and busted down doors. People were swept away in the current, cleared from the scene and left gasping for air along the sidewalks.

Cason broke free from the current almost a block away, coughing to clear his throat and staggering to his feet through the receding water. He held up his arm to block the rainfall as he huffed air through his mouth. 

A glowing figure stood on the platform. The glint of the light made it difficult to decipher which was water and which was his physical body.

Behind him, protected and half-obscured by swirling mist, stood the Barean.

Cason mustered his weakened anger and grabbed his gun. He shouted and fired a shot, but water effortlessly collected in front of The Outlier and deflected it. He continued firing as he trudged through the slushy ground towards him, but every shot bent and diffused through the humid air. 

He roared when he ran out of charges, and he tried to rush at The Outlier instead. He recoiled when something was tossed to the soaked ground at his feet. He looked down to find broken metal shackles rocking back and forth in a puddle.

When he looked up, mist was slowly receding from the empty platform.

The acting commander shut his eyes.

Today was a day he would not soon forget.

 

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Not gonna lie I still really like the idea of Ace having water power all the time 😁 But he doesn't exactly need it in the real story. Although his mom has a totem that creates mist, hmmm......

Also I decided everyone needs a friend like Elliot.

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