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Sapphyre: A Tale - Part 5
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As Christopher breaks above the surface and takes in a breath of air, Sapphyre peeks out of the water with him. 

Chris: These gills are still here, even now. Perhaps they won’t go away?

Phyre: I don’t know. I’ve never used this power before; I’ve heard it was used long ago to rescue humans from drowning, but when humans began to look for and exploit merkind… we are not supposed to.

Chris: Well, that’s all right. That just means I can live in the kelp forest with you forever! Nothing to worry about–no cares… only you…

He looks at her when she doesn’t reply, and he notices her gazing almost longingly into the sky as a seagull flies overhead.

 

Song: "Flight"

At once, Sapphyre finds herself reaching upward, kicking her tail to rise and fall, almost dancing through the water. She leaps above, breaching like a while. All the while Christopher watches in awe.

When at last Sapphyre's dance concludes, he smiles wide. 

Chris: Wow... If I didn't know any better, I'd say you feel the most at home up here.

Phyre: ...So what if I do.

Chris: So… why do you? I have a feeling you're the only mermaid who does... that no others understand your connection.

Phyre: (eyes flash up) Connection?

Chris: (confused) ...What? 

Sapphyre darts under water.

Chris: (struggles to follow) Wait–what did I say??


This is the song that linked itself to Sapphyre and probably started this whole thing. It was at a ballet I was recording at my last job and I was floored watching little dancers swirl around to this gorgeous music, and being in my Sapphyre phase, the rest was history. And yes… I will continue the weird shallow dialog haha.

 

Song: "Love Dance"

Phyre: (remains turned away) I... I was not always a mermaid.

Chris: What do you mean?

Phyre: (looks over her shoulder) I was a human once. But I was captured. I was made to become who I am now. I woke up in a strange facility with no memory of who I was before–only that I was created... and that I was their prisoner.

Chris: Oh, Phyre–how? Why? Who would do such a thing?

Phyre: I don't know...

Chris: Then... how did you come to be here?

Phyre: (gazes to the surface) One of the men in the facility... he was kind to me. He helped me escape one night. I don't know what became of him, but I owe him my life... this life. Lady Aria found me hiding at the edge of the kelp forest. She took me in, brought me to the Enclave, and I learned how to become a mermaid. I tried to fit in... I tried to make friends and find a home...

Chris: But you were made to be on the surface, so it calls to you.

He draws close to her, turning her body to face his. 

Chris: And, perhaps, I was made to be here with you.

Phyre: ...Underwater?

Chris: Wherever you are...

They kiss, gently, then grow passionate. Sapphyre's tail curls around his legs, swirling them in the water between the tall strands of kelp and the surface of the water.

Phyre: I want to be wherever you are. Wherever you go–whatever you do...

Chris: Phyre... Sapphyre... I will go nowhere without you. 

Their foreheads touch. 

Chris: ...I love you.

Phyre's eyes open wide, only to drop closed as she holds him tighter.

Phyre: I love you too. 

 

Song: "Battlefield"

Voice: There!!

In Christopher's arms, Phyre gazes across the top of the kelp forest to find Lady Aria and a host of merkind approaching. They are dressed in crude armor and have weapons and shields, ready for battle.

Looking the opposite way, Christopher sees the Shark King and his army taking their place behind him. They also carry weapons and are covered in armor.

They at once pull apart to glance between the two groups, who approach until their lines are mere feet from each other–with Sapphyre and Christopher in between.

King: So! It IS true! You have been planning war!

Aria: And it is true that you have taken one of our own!

King: I have taken no one–YOU have sent your spy!

Keiki: And you have joined forces with the humans to attack us!

Aria: We have sent no spies! We have no allegiance with humans!

King: Then, who is this??

Chris: (boldly) I am Christopher–I am not a spy, and neither is Sapphyre! She saved me from drowning, and we have taken protection among the Kelp-Dwellers so that I may learn her ways!

Aria: Sapphyre–is this true? We thought you had been taken!

Phyre: It is true–I am sorry, Lady Aria. I did not realize I had caused so much concern…

Aria: You are one of us, my dear Phyre!

Kalli: Please–please come back home!

Sapphyre: (moved to tears) And… and Christopher?

Aria: He is welcome, too, if he wishes to remain here.

Sapphyre and Christopher look at each other and smile gratefully.

King: (incredulously) All of this has been… a misunderstanding??

Iolana: (nervously to Otieno) What are we to do now?? The King will have us beheaded!!

Otieno: (panicking, yells above the crowd) I–I don’t believe them! Why would they show up in full armor? Why would they be ready to fight??

Others chime in similarly.

Phyre: (Turning to the sharks) Please, we mean no harm to you or your kind!

Keiki: Lies!!

King: Keiki!!

But it is too late. In his youthful haste, Keiki throws a spear at Sapphyre. When she dodges, the spear instead strikes a merman in the army behind her.

Aria & King: No!!

Other merkind rush forward in retaliation as other sharks do the same. The chaos of battle at once erupts in the waters between the surface and the kelp forest.

During the battle, Christopher wields a spear and tries to fight, but without fins, he’s slow in the water and not much use. Iolana targets him, disarms him, and reels back to stab him with her own spear–only for Sapphyre to rush in his place. She is stabbed (the part where the song drops to just choir for a moment–chills, I tell you), but then struggles to continue fighting, wounding Iolana and driving her away.

As Sapphyre loses strength from her bleeding side, Christopher begins to lose his gills and struggles to get to the surface. They reach each other moments before the battle envelopes them. It rages on until shouts break the chaos.

King: No!!

Aria: Stop!!

At once, the two lines draw back to find Keiki has fallen. Filled with sorrow, the Shark King collects his son in his arms and cries with grief. Aria calls out for Sapphyre, but none can find her. When all realize what has happened and see what has been done–fallen bodies floating lifelessly as the wounded cower in the kelp among the kelp-dwellers–all slowly back away.

Sapphyre and Christopher are nowhere to be seen.

 

Song: “Aftermath”

As a mournful song fills the scene, Shael, his arm bandaged, and Kalli slowly drift near the kelp forest. A few merpeople are huddled on the outskirts, mending wounds and mourning losses.

Shael’s eyes find something on the ground. With horrified sorrow, he finds Sapphyre and Christopher lifeless at the sea floor. Christopher’s gills are gone, and Sapphyre’s body is torn, but they lie together, holding each other in their final moments.

Shael bows sorrowfully as Kalli joins his side and mourns, but when he looks up, he almost believes he sees Sapphyre and Christopher smiling at him from the edge of the kelp-forest. When he blinks again, he sees them no more.

Slowly, they turn and swim away.

 

………It’s a SAD ENDING. But the music is SAD! I didn’t know what to do with it! I think that contributed to why I stopped writing this one (also it’s really not a very complex plot or story or dialog or anythingggg…)

Ironically, I have since seen KA in Vegas, and the real story only has slightly more depth (it’s all pantomime and acrobatics)–but there’s also twice as many songs, AND it ends happily for the main characters. The evil village’s son gets killed in the battle and that ends the war, so I apparently got that part right. But the soundtrack doesn’t have the finale song, so here we are.

Anyway, hope you enjoyed that random trip down my memory lane!

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Song: "Threat"

Shael searches for Sapphyre... and finds her necklace at the edge of the kelp forest.

Kalli: Lady Aria! I've spoken to everyone! No one has seen Phyre!

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Kalli: ...And I have to wonder... if it was my fault... I was rude to her... I shouldn't have said what I did. It's hard for her because... because of her... heritage.

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Shael: I fear the SHARKS have taken her...

Kalli: Lady Aria-what should we do?

 

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Aria: ...We cannot risk war... we are not certain she was taken.

Kalli: Even if she doesn't think she is, she is still one of us.

Aria: ...And we will fight for her.

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Shark King: Otieno! Iolana!

Otieno: Sir.

Shark King: ...Where have you two been?

Otieno: We were scouting, sir. Like you said to. Patrolling the kelp forest and the outskirts of the Merkind's realm.

Iolana: And we found a MERMAID in the kelp forest.


Dorian as the scarred and bitter Shark King fits surprisingly well, hah. But do I remember his name? I do not.

 

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King: A mermaid?

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Keiki: She's right!!

King: Keiki...

Keiki: But Father–

King: One mermaid alone is not a threat.

Iolana: She had a HUMAN with her.

King: ...Go on.

Iolana: This one is always alone... until now. It could be the merkind are using humans to better plan an attack!

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Keiki looks like he may be based on Henri from the Elemental Guardians fanfic who later grew up to become Phoenix in ToAG. Also still no one seems to be baffled by why a human is underwater but ok!

 

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King: However... if what you say is true, it would be best to prepare than to be caught off guard.

Keiki: So we will fight them?

Iolana: Should we prepare for war?

King: Yes. Prepare for war. But if there is no threat... (gazes at Iolana and Otieno) ...it will be on YOUR heads.

Iolana's form mirrors Sapphyre as they gaze blankly onward.

Chris: Phyre! (cozies up to her) Still as elusive as ever.

Phyre: I was waiting for you.

Chris: I suppose I did say I wanted to come up for air again.

The two swim up to the surface, past the edge of the kelp forest.


….AND that's all that's drawn. I'll try to fill in the rest of the story as best as I can remember using the music in one last part!

 

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Sapphyre: A Tale - Part 3
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Song: "Pursuit"

Iolana: Otieno, would you look at that!

Otieno: Iolana, I see it... though it's awfully hard to believe...

Iolana: The mermaid has returned... and she's brought a two-legged friend with her... And now's the time we finally pay her a visit.

The sharks emerge from hiding.

Otieno: Well! Look here!

Iolana: The lone mermaid again separated from her companions!

Phyre: Sharks!

Otieno: That's right, but if you're nice we may let you go...

Phyre: You can't do anything to me–we're at peace!

Otieno: You're alone... who's gonna know?


Iolana and Otieno are Dawn and Ed if you couldn't tell, lol. I think I looked up all kinds of water-related names for the characters; they’re all very unique. Also I love how no one questions how a human is underwater like this.

 

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Chris: I don't believe she is alone!

Iolana: (jealously) Yes, Otieno, I don't believe she IS...

She swims closer to Christopher.

Iolana: You, however, HUMAN, would make a fine trophy... A proper tribute to the Shark King... So, while we're at it, we might as well bring him a mermaid SPY!

Phyre: You'd call me a spy, would you? The only way you'd do that... is if you could have caught me!


Oh… the “plot”... LOL

 

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Otieno: I knew they'd bolt!

Iolana: Shut up!!

Chris: Up ahead–we can hide in there!

Phyre: The kelp forest? But that's the division between our land and the sharks!

Chris: It doesn't look like the sharks are following boundary lines at the moment.

Phyre: Good point.

Otieno: They're going in the kelp forest!

Iolana: That'll slow them down!

They swim away as the sharks follow after, leaving Sapphyre's necklace behind.

 

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As Sapphyre and Christopher–and Iolana and Otieno–make their way through the kelp forest, they get caught in the vines.

Phyre: They're going to catch us–

Llyr: No they won't–come this way!

He hides them away in the kelp.

Iolana: Wh–where are they?? We couldn't have lost them!

Otieno: I don't see them up ahead... Maybe they've gone back the other way!


Vance makes his leafy-sea-dragon debut!

 

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Llyr: Good, they turn away.

Sapphyre notices Christopher has a hand on her shoulder and they nervously part.

Llyr: You are safe for now, though they may return.

Chris: Thank you, sir, we truly appreciate it... May I ask who–who you are?

Llyr: Oh! I apologize... I am Llyr, and you are in the realm of the Kelp-Dwellers!

 

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Song: "Forest"

Kambu: Ah! Welcome! Llyr, thank you for guiding these two. I am Kambu, leader of the Kelp-Dwellers.

Phyre: (shyly) I'm Phyre. And this is Christopher.

Kambu: A pleasure. It has been some time since we have seen a mermaid--or a greater expanse since we've seen a human. How is it you breathe underwater?

Chris: Well–

Phyre: I've never heard of Kelp-Dwellers before.

Kambu: Ah, because we live in secret. We are found when we need to be found.

Chris: Actually, Llyr found us.

Kambu: We do find those who need us if necessary!


Leafy Mioko and Raeya! 

 

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Kambu: Llyr is young, but he knows what he is doing.

Kelp Queen: You are free to stay as long as you wish.

Kambu: All are welcome! No one is turned away!

Chris: I believe we should stay awhile, don't you think?

Phyre: But what about you? Don't you need to return to the surface?

Chris: I'll let you know when I'm ready to return. Let's enjoy this peaceful place for now... together.


I don't remember the Kelp Queen/Raeya's name…

 

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Sapphyre and Christopher find themselves getting closer...

But Iolana and Otieno are unable to find them.

Otieno: Come on, Iolana, we're not going to find them.

Iolana: ...Fine.

They swim away, reluctantly.


That was a quick falling in love sequence, lol. It’s like the whole story was put on 2x speed (or more lol).

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Sapphyre: A Tale - Part 2
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Song: "Storm"

The man is taking on water and his sails are torn as he battles to stay afloat in the storm.

Christopher: This–this may be it... This is where my journey will... end!

The boat capsizes.


Christopher was an attempt at a new character but he was heavily influenced by the Eleventh Doctor. With the rest of the characters being borrowed I’m surprised I was concerned about making him a separate character, honestly.

 

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Song: "Deep"

The man struggles to return to the surface, but the water, waves, storm, and the breaking boat prevent him. He soon falls motionless, sinking to the ocean floor... beside a mermaid.

 

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She swims up to him, cautiously. 

Phyre: A human... what do I do? He'll die... if he hasn't already. But I'm not supposed to do anything... he's a HUMAN... But...

 

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Gently leaning over him, Sapphyre brings her lips to his and kisses him.

At once, the man gasps, eyes wide open. Horrified, Sapphyre darts away as he struggles to catch his 'breath.'

Christopher: What... How... I'm... I'm underwater! I'm breathing...

Their eyes meet.


I'm not sure what gives Sapphyre the gill-giving ability in this story… it’s possible it’s a mermaid thing (since she mentions how she’s not ‘supposed’ to do something to help him–insinuating that she could?) or maybe Lady Aria gave her the ability like Neva does in the final. If it was ever explained, it was in the bits I didn’t get to and don’t remember.

 

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Chris: Wait! You're–you're a–Gahh! Th-this water! This is just... so odd...

He feels his neck.

Chris: AGHH!! My neck! What on earth?! GILLS?? (defeatedly) My word... I have got to be dreaming. I've died and I'm dreaming. I have to be... Seeing things... Breathing underwater...

He notices Sapphyre.

 

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Song: "Shadowplay"

Chris: But... but it's not a dream, is it. I'm really here, and you're really a mermaid. And you... you saved me...

Phyre: (backs away before he can touch her) ...Yes.

Chris: ...Why?

Phyre: You needed saving...

Chris: And the... GILLS... How long will these be here?

Phyre: I'm not sure... long enough for you to return to the surface.

Chris: What makes you think I want to return?

Phyre: Because-because you're human... you belong there.

Chris: I suppose so... (reaches for her hand) ...What's your name?

 

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Sapphyre again retreats.

Chris: ...Sorry.

Phyre: What's yours?

Chris: Christopher. And you?

Phyre: Phyre.

Chris: Phyre?

Phyre: As in Sapphyre.

Chris: ...Beautiful name. It fits you. (watches her swim by) ...You don't say much, do you?

Phyre: I don't often speak to humans.

Chris: What about other mermaids?

 

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Sapphyre turns away, flustered.

Chris: What's wrong?

Phyre: (rushes at him) What about you?

Chris: (surprised) What about me?

Phyre: Why would you say you would not return to the surface?

Chris: I am merely a traveler... I've no ties to anyone on the surface... I move where I must, stay where I must... I was sailing where I must when the storm did me in...

Phyre: Do you feel you... belong on the surface?

Chris: I suppose... Don't quite belong anywhere. Why? You seemed rather defensive a moment ago...

Phyre: It was nothing.

Chris: Is it really? Something tells me there is as much about you that is hidden... As there is about ME.


Oh, the dialog… lol

 

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Phyre: It's just... nothing. I have a few friends. Sometimes I just need to be alone. More than the other mermaids... a lot more...

They get closer.

Phyre: (turns away) ...Why am I telling you this...

Chris: I'm not sure. But something tells me you needed to.

Phyre: (closes her eyes and begins to give in) I suppose.

But two figures are watching in the distance…

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