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Hazel
like a chapter 2 sort of
October 14, 2024

A green glowstick cut the darkness with a crack.

Hazel stared into the trees beyond the glow, his ears straining.

The girl at his side slowly rose, holding the glowstick over her head. “I can’t hear them anymore. We should be okay to move.”

The woods were nothing more than a line of old trees separating two cul-de-sacs. The cookie cutter houses all had their lights on. Shadowy figures paced in front of many of the lit windows.

He stuck near the girl’s back as they carefully alternated between casually walking and sprinting through the neighborhood.

The sky was graying with pre-dawn once they cleared the neighborhoods. The early risers were starting to leave their homes, either climbing into their cars idling in their driveways, or wandering sleepily to the bus stop.

The girl stopped feet away from the bus stop. “Hold my bag a sec.” She stuck the glowstick in her mouth, using both hands to rifle through the backpack. She extracted a red hoodie and continued digging.

Hazel allowed her to take back the backpack so that he was free to yank the hoodie over his head.

                “It’s a little tight, and not really in season, but I doubt anyone will look twice.” She handed him a transit pass. “This has enough on it to get us out of the city.” She hummed, cocking her head at him. “One more final touch….”

She removed her round-framed glasses and placed them on Hazel.

He was assaulted by a blur just different enough from the scenery to make his head hurt.

                “Can you see without these,” Hazel asked.

                “I’ll borrow them if I need to read something.” She clipped a streak of fake purple hair into her long, light brown hair. “Bus is here.”

They took seats beneath the monitor screen in the middle of the bus.

The monitor silently played the local weather predictions as the list of route stops scrolled along the bottom.

                “At least the weather looks nice this week.”

Hazel lowered the round frames to better stare at this girl.

She smiled sheepishly. “Just looking for a silver lining.”

A breaking news banner flashed onto the monitor. A police sketch with written description popped up: Witchboy At Large.

Hazel slid down, straightening at the sharp elbow in his ribs.

                “Don’t worry,” she murmured. “A generic description and rough sketch are nothing. Act casual.”

He stared out the window, but the creeping sense of eyes stealing looks at him kept him from taking in the scenery.

The lights inside the bus were too bright. It was too easy to stare at him, match him with the image and description on the screen. It needed to be darker. It needed to be much darker.

The lights flickered. The bus lurched.

An uneasy murmur buzzed through the bus.

                “Sometimes I wonder about these electric buses,” she muttered.

                “It needs to be darker…,” Hazel whispered.

                “What?”

The bus jerked to a halt as all the lights died.

The passengers expressed annoyance and unease at this, yelling at the driver accusations of not charging the bus or running out the battery.

The girl snatched her glasses from Hazel’s face, donning them, and looking around. She pulled him up and to the front of the bus.

                “Is this going to take long,” she asked the driver. “It’s our first day at work. We can’t be late. Can we get off?”

                “No refund on your passes. And, you’ll have to pull the manual opener. Obviously.”

The driver stood to address the other passengers while she pulled the lever to open the door. Hazel hopped out after her with no other course of action, and they jogged away from the dead bus.

                “Which way is your train station,” she asked once they rounded a corner.

Hazel stopped. “Wait… I need a minute.”

                “As long as it’s really a minute,” she said. “We don’t want to dawdle too long. People are going to start point fingers at any brown-haired teen boy before long.”

                “Who are you,” Hazel asked. “Where are we going? What about my dad? And just… everything!”

                “I’m Kaiza, and—.”

A police car’s siren gave a warning beep as it crawled by.

                “And that’s all for now,” Kaiza finished. “Train station, now?”

Hazel took the lead but stopped multiple times to get his bearings. He snuck a look at a placard with the city mapped out. The bold print and bright markers made it easy to locate their position and that of the train station.

It was a rectangular, brick building that did not stand out. The only thing that separated it out as a place of notice was the larger than average parking lot and the crowd shuffling inside.

Kaiza stepped over to read the timetable. “Is the last stop too obvious? Maybe we should do the second to last?”

                “Wouldn’t it be easier to use one of those rideshare things,” Hazel asked. “You could have the driver go all over if you wanted to lose a tail.”

                “Way too pricey, and then you get the problem of adding some other person to the mix,” Kaiza said. “And I don’t have my phone. And they’ll probably tip off those rideshare apps.”

She decided on the second to last stop.

Hazel took the window seat.

There was a familiarity about the rocking train and speeding scenery despite Hazel unable to recall when he would have ridden the train before. He searched for the memory, his eyelids growing heavy now that his adrenaline had calmed.

Kaiza’s voice added to the peace, Hazel aware she was explaining something but not aware enough to catch what it was. He murmured nothing in a vain attempt to converse before sleep won out.

 

Hazel stirred, his shoulder being shaken vigorously. He quickly realized he was still on the train and that Kaiza was the one rousing him.

The station was much smaller than the one they departed from. The landscape beyond being residential and spread out. There were few passengers left now, and fewer outside waiting to board.

                “How could I fall asleep,” Hazel muttered, rubbing his green eyes.

                “C’mon, the doors are going to close,” Kaiza urged, pulling Hazel from his seat.

They slipped through the doors as the whistle blew.

The clock above the train schedule indicated it was now midday. The mild weather caused Hazel to sweat in his borrowed hoodie.

Kaiza rested her backpack on the plastic seats bolted into the side of the station. “We should snack a bit. You aren’t allergic to nuts, are you? I got a peanut bar and a cashew bar? Your pick.”

Hazel finished the peanut bar in two bites. It dawned on him that he had not eaten since lunch yesterday, and that had been nibbles due to his anxiety over his secret being discovered.

His father was likely arrested for harboring him.

                “We should get moving,” Kaiza said, offering to take his wrapper from him. “It shouldn’t be too much of a hassle to walk to the last stop. Train stops aren’t horribly spread out if you’re willing to cut through yards.”

                “Won’t jumping fencing make people notice us more,” Hazel asked.

                “I meant more along the lines of unattended, un-fenced fields and the random, small parks, but I like the cautious thinking.” She frowned at the audible rumble from Hazel’s stomach. “Another reason to get moving; we can blend with the lunch goers at the next stop.”

They headed off.

Hazel tried to ignore the hunger pangs, but that peanut bar had teased his appetite. He had concerns much bigger than eating lunch.

Kaiza had told him her name, but that was not useful in knowing who she was and why she was outside his house. He was sure she was not associated with the witch finders; ushering him around in secret was too much trouble to simply hand him over.

                “So… may I ask something,” Kaiza said. “On the bus… with the power dying like that… was that you?”

                “Yes,” Hazel said hesitantly. “Or, probably. Possibly. …Yeah.”

                “That was so cool,” Kaiza squee’d. She cleared her throat. “It was pretty impressive, but so dangerous! And, kind of puzzling. Why’d you do that? No one noticed us.”

                “I don’t really know,” Hazel said sheepishly. “It’s like… sometimes I hyper-focus and can’t stop until something happens.”

Kaiza hummed. “I bet that’s because you don’t have any training.”

                “How’d you know that,” Hazel asked. “Are you a witch?”

                “I wish! That’d be awesome!” Kaiza kicked a dandelion head. “Just a mage-blooded that thinks magic is neat.”

He never gave his magic much thought, but on introspection, it was an amazing thing. He could do little more than turn lights and electric appliances on with a snap of his fingers, but it was a convenient trick.

His father did not like magic. It made him ridged and uneasy. Hazel was discouraged from using it and practicing it.

                “You still think it’s cool even though… well….” Hazel gestured to himself.

Kaiza adjusted her round frames. “I’m more in the mind of individuals. You seem like a good guy, so it’s still cool. If you were creepy, well, then I wouldn’t be doing any of this.”

                “Why are you doing this,” Hazel asked. “Actually… what are you doing? I don’t even know that much.”

Kaiza went mum as they turned a corner onto a busier street outside the last station on the line. Commuters lined up by the handful of food carts to grab something before heading off. The train sat empty with all the doors open for the cleaning crew to give it a once over before it went back down the tracks.

                “Grab us a seat down at the end of the track,” Kaiza said. “I’ll grab lunch.” She dug through her backpack, extracting a wallet, and passed her bag to Hazel. “We can chat over fries.”

He sat on the bench furthest from the food carts and open train doors. He felt the weight of Kaiza’s bag on his lap. He fingered the zipper, glanced to see where Kaiza was, and slowly gave it a tug.

The backpack was stuffed with shirts and caps. They ranged in size from toddler to early elementary, all sporty or boyish in style.

                “What are you doing?”

Hazel leapt up with one hand still in the bag. He ignored Kaiza’s expression, being too hungry to do anything but stare at the large order of chili cheese fries in her delicate hands. His face reddened at the extra loud rumble from his guts.

Kaiza set the fries on the bench between them, and relived Hazel of her backpack. She stuffed her wallet back among the clothing before zipping it up.

                “My advisor is on a mission to rescue witchboys,” Kaiza murmured. She smiled weakly. “I never expected to find one your age.”

Most witchboys were between two and five when they were caught and tried for witchcraft. His father plainly told him it was unusual for a witchboy to make it that far, typically the witch and her husband discarding sons much earlier to be on the safe side.

                “So you… browse the news for upcoming trails, and try to get to the witchboy before they’re executed,” Hazel questioned. “How many have you saved?”

Kaiza dropped her gaze. She plucked a fry from the tray, and stuck it in her mouth to avoid speaking.

It would be impossible to sneak a captive witchboy out of jail. It would be suicide to storm the gallows.

                “How long have you been doing this,” Hazel asked.

                “This is my first solo run,” Kaiza said. “I did go with my advisor twice before now.”

Hazel nodded that he heard her, his mouth too full to ask a follow-up. He took the napkins Kaiza pulled from her back pocket.

                “It was a total shot in the dark finding you,” Kaiza added. “With the other hangings, my advisor and me left immediately after, and then read about the witch finders going door-to-door looking for other witchboys well after the fact. I decided the best chance of really finding one and helping would be to stick around and keep an ear out after the hanging.” She beamed. “I’m ecstatic that it paid off.”

                “Same.”

They laughed lightly at the awkwardness of the situation.

They separated off to the bathroom after the fries were finished and the paper tray tossed.

Hazel studied his face as he washed his hands. There were bags under his green eyes and his skin was dull. The nap on the train did not combat all the exhaustion from being hunted all night.

He wrestled out of the hoodie after exiting the bathroom. The afternoon sun was bright in the cloudless sky.

Kaiza now had her hair tied up in a bun. The fake purple hair was removed, and her face was tinted red from washing it in the cold water.

                “Keep the sweatshirt,” Kaiza said. “It’ll be dark when we get in. It might get chilly.”

Hazel followed Kaiza way from the platform. “So… where are we going?”

 

The afternoon was uneventful filled with walking, another bus ride, and more walking. The sun was long down as the two of them found themselves at the mouth of a planned neighborhood surrounded by vast nothingness.

Kaiza’s orange glowstick and the moonlight shone enough to make out that the neighborhood sign read Rusty Blackbird Court. The road was paved, but only a single house was constructed among the cleared land.

Light shown from the first floor with a much weaker light akin to candlelight glowing from one of the second floor windows.

                “Hopefully Mr. Gedney is still awake and he didn’t just leave the lights on for us,” Kaiza said.

Hazel could not find the strength to add to her comment. He could not remember ever walking so much before. His feet hurt. His legs ached. He was sticky from sweat but chilled from that sweat cooling beneath the sweatshirt.

Kaiza led him into the house.

The house was sparsely furnished and what furniture was there looked like random pieces off a showroom floor. The light fixtures were in different styles. The walls were different shades of off-white and cool gray.

Hazel dragged behind Kaiza through the spacious kitchen to a closed door. A sliver of warm light lined the bottom of the door.

                “Mr. Gedney,” Kaiza called, knocking lightly.

The door was yanked open.

Mr. Gedney was older than Hazel’s father by fifteen to twenty years. His hair was fully gray, and thin on the top. His eyes were dull and watery, the lower half magnified by his bifocal reading glasses perched on his skinny nose.

                “Kaiza,” Mr. Gedney exclaimed. He hugged her hastily. “Oh, thank God! The news said another witchboy was discovered in that city. An arrest was made. I was so worried you were involved.”

                “Well…,” Kaiza trailed off, stepping aside. “This is Hazel.”

Mr. Gedney’s eyes bugged as his jaw slowly drooped. He shuffled by Kaiza to better stare, surveying Hazel up and down, side to side.

Hazel shifted uncomfortably.

                “Extraordinary,” Mr. Gedney breathed. “How old are you?”

                “Fifteen,” Hazel answered.

                “Fifteen,” Mr. Gedney said. “Not much older than Salem…. And you remained hidden all those years? How?”

                “I was homeschooled,” Hazel said unsurely.

Hazel felt every inch of his body ache with exhaustion as he recognized Mr. Gedney’s building excitement. He had not slept enough, eaten enough, or had time enough to process what happened to be ready for an interrogation.

                “Mr. Gedney,” Kaiza said, giving a small wave to direct his attention to her. “It’s nearly midnight. He should sleep.”

                “Oh, of course, I’m so sorry,” Mr. Gedney said. “I was getting ahead of myself.” He stifled a yawn. “Truth be told, now that I’m not worried sick, I very well could sleep.”

                “I’ll get Hazel settled,” Kaiza offered.

                “Then I’ll see you both in the morning,” Mr. Gedney said.

He followed Kaiza away from the office with gratitude filling him. His thoughts were beginning to fuzz out. All he could muster was following Kaiza up the grand staircase without tripping over himself.

Kaiza opened a white door with a brass knob. The bedroom was as sparse as the rest of the house with only a full-sized fourposter sans curtains.

                “There might be a spare nightstand or chest-o-drawers in storage,” Kaiza said. She gestured to a thinner door next-door. “That’s the linen closet. Towels are there. Extra blankets. The bathroom is across the hall. And my room is down there at the end if you need something else.”

Hazel gave her a tired smile and small nodded as she departed for her room.

He touched the plush comforter on the neatly made bed and stepped away. As much as his body begged for rest, he could not put aside the thought that he was having difficulty remembering the last time he bathed.

He pulled a dark green towel from the linen closet before locking himself in the bathroom.

The standalone shower was a different make than the soaking tub beneath the picture window. There were two sinks in the vanity, each sporting different fixtures. The backsplash behind the bronze fixtures matched the tile around the soaking tub while the backslash behind the chrome fixtures matched the tile for the shower.

The hot shower was refreshing but also exasperated his tiredness. He did little more than but rinse, afraid that he would fall asleep standing if he lingered longer.

He put back on the clothes he had traveled in; it dawning on him that he would have to sleep in them which rendered the shower useless.

A door was quickly shut as he stepped into the hall. It was not Kaiza’s door.

                “Hello,” Hazel called in a whisper. “Kaiza?”

There was no answer, but a small creaking like door hinges moving was enough to get Hazel to scurry to his room and not call out again.

Hazel found the light on. There was a buttered piece of wheat toast sitting on a porcelain plate resting on the bed. A dark t-shirt and basketball shorts were tossed haphazardly next to it.

He double checked that the hall was empty before changing, keeping his eyes on the door as a precaution. He scarfed down the toast and was out as soon as his head hit the pillow.

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I think I did this one after the failed Mae (first) attempt and after the Breeching Halcyon Hall since the last modified day was June 1. I wanted to see if I should try doing Witchboy in normal format. I did manage to finish what would be a chapter, but I think the comic style is better. The only issue I have with that is it typically takes the mystery of things away since names are right out there because you're giving the script to an artist and can't be like "oooh that teenaged girl seven pages ago was Kaiza" because that would screw up the art. So, random conversation with a stranger isn't so random because 'stranger' would be 'Salem' or something. But that's all just me spinning my wheels over it.

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Ace slipped out of the booth with a final grin, took his guitar case by the handle, and returned to the door. He could feel the familiar spark in his veins; the heat of adrenaline and the rush of confidence. It had been quite a few years since he had felt it, but it felt the same as it always had: warm and inviting…

He inhaled a puff of cigar smoke and choked. He had spent enough time here.

 

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Oh man I'm not sure why I like this one so much; I was devastated when I thought I lost it; but I just had it saved in a different spot on my main hard drive all along 🙄 I think it's just a fun interaction between Ace and someone who's known him a while and has enough spunk to make a lasting impression.

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BUT... spoiler alert... after losing the joust, he returns to Fortanya to some very good news - and that's how the soon-to-be newlywed Gallaghers get their house ;)

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A Tale of Ace Gallagher Short from Book #1

A spattering of applause followed as Ace bowed, set down the guitar, and returned to his table.

Athena was both leaning on her hand and using it to cover her mouth and chin. She took one look at Ace's ear-to-ear grin and added her other hand to her ever-reddening cheeks.

“So?” Ace slid back into the seat breathily.

“I’m not sure I like all this attention,” Athena spoke through her hands and flashed him a coy glance. “But you play–and sing–really well.”

“I had good inspiration.” He admitted as his own cheeks flushed pink.

Athena relocated her hands under her chin. “You are quite the charmer, Ace.” Her expression faded when she noticed Ace’s head droop, struggling against the pain from his ever-worsening curse–despite trying to hide it behind a clenched fist.

When he glanced up, his expression soured for a completely different reason. 

“Well, if it isn’t Ace Gallagher,” the first of two young women stepped up to the table, her body twisting within a short, clingy black dress as she spoke. “I must say I’m surprised.”

“Surprised you’d risk showing your face again after all you did the last time you were in Montrose.” The second added as she casually leaned her hip against the table beside him. Her ruffled skirt had a slit up to her mid-thigh, and she was sure to twist it towards Ace.

The young man grunted to clear his throat, glancing between a somewhat confused Athena and the two women. “Oh yeah?”

The first girl sneered. “You left quite a few casualties in your wake.” She gave a quick glance to Athena, who seemed both confused and concerned. “Sweetheart, allow me to break it to you easy–you're not the first lady he’s ever sung that song to.”

“Or the second,” the other added, rolling her eyes.

Athena’s mouth opened, but Ace was quick to recover the attention. “All right, ladies; if your issue’s with me, I’d appreciate it if you’d leave her out of this.”

“Oh, this concerns her too,” she put up a hand to shield her mouth from Ace. “Watch where he puts his hands,” she hissed a whisper.

“Hey!” Ace spouted, banging both hands onto the table. He caught Athena’s eyes for a moment before the girls again pulled them away.

“Also, when you leave, you’d better make sure you have everything you came in with.” She narrowed her eyes at Ace. “The cozier he gets, the more will end up ‘missing’.”

Ace's fingers clenched. “That's not fair!”

“What you do isn't fair!” She spat.

“Look: I’m sorry–is that what you're looking for??” Ace’s brows were heavily furrowed as his breathing grew increasingly labored.

“‘Sorry’ doesn’t undo what you've done!” The girl mocked, sliding her hip across the side of the table and leaning into his face. “‘Sorry’ means nothing when you’re still stealing from any woman you can charm!”

Ace was pressed as far against the back of his chair as he could be, his face flushed from anger, disappointment, and the confrontation itself. “Is there anything else you’d like to say while you're accosting me?” His voice was a raspy whisper.

The two girls turned to Athena. 

Her expression and stiffened posture remained guarded as she looked back at them.

“I think we’ve made our point.” One said without even a glance over her shoulder. “Come on, Jess.”

The young women sauntered away, returning to their seats at a table with two other women, joining their pairs of eyes to the glares beating down from across the room.

Ace grunted to clear his throat, his body relaxing as the threat settled. “Sheesh,” he raked his fingers through his hair almost nervously. “Now we’ve really got all the attention.”

Athena turned her head away from the stares and looked cautiously upon Ace. “Can we step outside?”

He sighed. “Yeah, that’s probably for the best.”

The young woman stood and started to the door with Ace struggling to keep up. He had scarcely stepped outside when Athena abruptly turned around.

“Was that true?”

Ace straightened up. “What?”

“Was what they said true?”

He wheezed in a deep breath, watching Athena’s once warm eyes turn cold. “Come on,” he said nervously, “don’t tell me you're letting them get to you. You know how–uh–exes can be sometimes–”

“Do you really steal from any woman you can charm?” Athena repeated their words bluntly. 

The gambler could tell bluffing would no longer work. “When you’re desperate and starving on the streets,” his voice softened, “you sometimes do things you're not proud of.”

Athena’s form sunk with disappointment. “So, was I next?” Her words were barely a whisper.

“What–no!” His fist clenched at his chest.

“How can I be sure?”

Ace's jaw went slack. “I'm gonna get this from you, too?”

“I’d like to know if I can trust you.”

“You can,” he answered succinctly.

“Not if I’m the next pawn in your game,” Athena frowned.

“Pawn,” Ace grit his teeth and coughed, “that's absolutely not what you are!”

“Then, look me straight in the eye and tell me you weren’t just going to steal from me,” she took a step closer to him, “that all this singing and charming and rescuing isn’t just some ploy to get something out of me.”

Ace hesitated as realization struck. After years of taking all he could, he had never once thought of stealing from Athena. He had never once thought about how he could use her to his advantage. He had reached into his own money bag to pay for her rescue without a single thought to what could have happened next, and in return, she had been kind to him. That was all he could have asked for.

Athena’s lips pressed tightly as Ace lingered in silent thought. “I think I need to go.”

Ace jolted out of his mind. “Wait!”

“I’m sorry,” Athena backed up. “I really do hope you can get healed from the curse, but I think it’s best if you finish without me.”

“Athena!” He reached for her hand, though she kept it out of reach, “I would never steal from you! You are not a pawn! I–I may have sang that song to other people, but, I swear, this is the first time it's ever felt right–” 

“Then, maybe we can catch up in Fortanya,” she dismissed him and turned away.

“Athena, please!!” He struggled to breathe and retain his composure as the woman walked gracefully away from him. He could not immediately find the strength to run after her; he could not cause his feet to move.

He could only watch as she continued down the road in silent agony.

“Allan!” She called, squinting at the skies in an attempt to find the black bird against the darkening sky. She whistled his call as she continued walking, but she still received no answer. “Where is he…”

She had barely turned the corner when she was met by Mioko as he approached from camp.

“Hey Athena!” Mioko's smile was quick to fade when he noticed her pained expression. “What's up?”

Athena attempted a smile. “I just... I need to head back.”

“Oh, okay,” the Weivan nodded, allowing her to pass. He paused, turning as a heaviness filled his chest. “Back to camp, or back to Fortanya?”

Athena glanced over her shoulder at him. Her face was bent with disappointment, tainted with a hint of sadness. She could not immediately find words to speak; she could only turn and continue on to camp to collect her belongings.

Mioko watched her for a moment before returning his attention to the street. He quickly pointed out a familiar face approaching from across the road.

“Dorian,” he rushed toward him, “did you see Ace?”

The Kalgaran had initially backed up when the Weivan came at him. “No; why?”

“I think something happened,” he turned as his hand pointed behind him. “Athena just came back without him and went back to camp… I think something may have happened between them.”

“All the more reason to stay out of this,” Dorian muttered and attempted to step past him.

“I just want to make sure everything’s okay,” Mioko, instead, stepped into his path. “We need everyone to continue on the mission.”

“Technically, we only need you and Ace,” Dorian tilted his head in an attempt to look around Mioko. “You’re the one who knows the counter-curse Ace needs. The rest of us are just here because…” He trailed off.

“Because Ace owes you potions?” Mioko replied, eyeing him.

“Yeah,” he draped his thumbs on his pants pockets.

Mioko nodded. “Well, I guess we can just go back to camp and wait to see if he comes back soon. I haven’t seen Hylas in a while, either.”

“Didn’t he say he was going to check with the Patrol office here? Also, we told everyone we were leaving for the mountains tomorrow. What’s it matter where they’re up to tonight–”

A rustling in the bushes beside them garnered both of their attention. 

As the shadowed figure stepped into the street light, Dorian quickly unslung his staff and thrust it at the young woman who appeared.

“Wait,” the Amorfian threw up her hands. “I mean no harm.”

“Then, stay there,” Dorian inched the staff further.

“Dorian,” Mioko glanced at him, only to look back at the tall Amorfian before them. “What do you need, miss?”

The Amorfian gave Dorian a weak scowl before turning her silver eyes to Mioko. “I’m sorry for overhearing but… did you say Hylas?”

“I did,” Mioko answered, still looking at her in awe. “He’s traveling with us; though, I haven’t seen him since we set up camp.”

“Oh,” her eyes fell away. The furred collar that draped over her shoulders was soon hidden behind her long black hair as she turned her head. Her deep black dress aided in blending her back into the shadows–save from her pale arms and legs.

“But you can stay with us until he returns.”

“What??” Doran finally broke eye contact with the Amorfian to shoot Mioko an incredulous look. “She’s the one who tried to steal your totem the other night!”

“Her?” Mioko gazed at her, half-dumbfounded and half-taken aback.

She wrinkled her nose at Dorian in disgust. “Oh, like you’ve never made a mistake in your whole life.”

“You accidentally tried to steal from him?”

“No,” she barked at him, only for her voice to soften, “I simply know, now, I shouldn’t have. I shouldn’t have been so desperate…”

The Weivan could see the guilt in her wandering eyes, and he took a small step forward. “I can imagine it’s difficult to be so far from your home. Did you come here to look for Hylas?”

“And what is he doing so far away from his home?” Dorian added under his breath.

“The same could be asked of you, Kalgaran” her eyes narrowed on him. “I didn’t think any of your kind were allowed to leave after your king was murdered.”

“Hold on,” Mioko stepped between the two when he noticed Dorian’s bristling. “Making jabs at each other isn’t helping anything,” he stood firmly. “As far as I’m concerned, we’re all waiting for people, so you can wait with us until Hylas and the others return. Then we can decide who needs to continue on to break the curse with Ace.”

“Curse?” The Amorfian’s bitter expression lightened.

A scream broke out in the forest nearby, silencing all three.

“...Was that Athena?” Mioko asked worriedly, eyes darting into the distance.

- - -

Disappointed and upset, Athena walked briskly down the streets of Montrose. She clutched the straps for her sword and her bag of belongings–both slung over her right shoulder after her brief stop at camp. The street lights stationed along the way were bright, blocking her ability to see past them. In the spaces between them, however, she continued to scan the skies for Allan.

She again whistled his call, slowing to a stop and holding out her arm. “Come on, Allan!”

A croaking sound swooped past her, and a raven fluttered onto a wooden sign of a building across the street.

“Oh,” she sighed with relief. “You were worrying me!” With another whistle, she held up her forearm higher.

The black bird tilted his head and leapt from the sign. He again swooped past her arm and flew down the cross street instead.

“Hey!” Athena darted after him. The street lights were sparsely placed on the cross road, and she quickly lost him in the shadows. “Allan!” Judging by the flapping of his wings, she rushed down the road until its stone-paved surface gave way to a grassy glen.

She caught a glimpse of him in the moonlight before he slipped into the forest.

“He must think we’re going back to camp,” she grit her teeth and ran after. “No!” She called and gave another whistle. “Come back! Allan!”

She fought through low-hanging branches and pushed through patches of moonlight until she ran straight into Hylas.

“Oh!” She bumped into him as the man held out his hands. “Sorry–I’m–chasing after Allan–did you see him?”

“Shh,” Hylas laid his hand on her shoulder and attempted to calm the young woman as she caught her breath, “deep breaths.”

Athena stepped back. “Sorry.”

The Amorfian’s silver eyes glistened as he eyed the bag on her back. “Are you going somewhere?”

She instinctively touched the straps still on her arm. “Oh, um,” she paused, “yeah, I’m… heading back to Fortanya.”

“Alone? At this time of night?”

“Well, once I find Allan, I’ll probably just go stay at an inn until morning…”

Hylas stepped forward just as she took a step back. “Are you not going to continue with us?” He paused, waiting for an answer that never came. “Is everything all right?”

The young woman frowned, finding concern in his eyes. “Yeah. It’s fine.”

He scooted closed. “It’s Ace, isn’t it,” he said simply. “He hurt you.”

Athena stopped moving away, pausing. “What–how did you…”

“I could see a connection growing between you,” he glanced aside. “And since he’s not here with you now…”

She sighed. “He disappointed me,” she admitted.

“It’s such a shame. He seems nice, but I’ve heard it from more than a few Patrolmen: he’s a wanted man.”

“Wanted?” Athena turned her head slightly towards him.

“Patrol has been instructed to keep an eye on him. Without real evidence, he has to be caught in the act or in an altercation before he can be captured for thievery,” his eyes slid back to her, “but I’m sure you know he’s a gambler too. It’s only a matter of time before he gets careless–and gets caught.”

A pang of regret pulsed through her. Despite everything she had just heard, thinking of Ace as a criminal didn’t seem right. Would a man with no remorse admit that he had done something wrong? Or perhaps he truly did feel different around her–enough to confess something he may never have confessed before.

“I need to go find him,” she muttered to herself and started to turn.

She jumped as Hylas took her elbow.

“But, you don’t need someone like him,” he held her arm firmly. “A gambler and a thief is no man for such a beautiful woman as yourself... he’ll always care about luck more than you... and luck is such a fragile thing...”

Athena felt her back against a tree.  She was so distracted she didn’t even realize she had moved until Hylas held her arms against it.

“...Almost as fragile as you are...”

“Hylas,” Athena gazed up at him as he held her tighter.

A toothy grin spread across his face.

She tried to wrench her arms out of his grasp to no avail. She gnashed her teeth and tried to kick him, but she was shoved backward into the tree and held firmly against it with his body. Pinned, she threw her head into his chin.

He yelled and recoiled, but only held Athena tighter as tiger-like claws poked into her arms and fangs inched closer to her cheek.

Athena screamed–only for Hylas to clap his clawed hand against her mouth.

“I’d shut up and hold still if I were you.” He sneered.

 

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Eeep. I forgot about this part, lol. But I had part of it rewritten so I finished it out for another short.

I fleshed out the tavern scene since... honestly I'm not sure what prompts Athena to freak out and leave in the first draft, but having two of Ace's "exes" show up and show just how much of a not so nice kind of person he's been really drove that home. I also hate but love how Ace's hesitance is from realizing "oh dang this girl really is different" but that hesitation makes Athena think he can't actually look her in the eye and say it. Oof.

Hylas has been kind of a creep around Athena prior to this, and this makes his true intentions known. Athena walks through the dimly lit forest in the original, but I felt as a single lady (even though she can defend herself) she'd be a lot smarter than that and take the route through town. But geting distracted and led away from passer-bys and street lights made that fit a little better.

Never fear, however, because Ace also heard the scream and runs to the rescue!

After all that gets settled is when the "Giselle" sketch takes place - and Athena learns whole truth about Ace's 'history'. I'm acually filling in gaps, omgosh.

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February 16, 2025
Children of the Moon

Pay no attention to the writing on the wall
The words seem empty cause there's nothing there at all
We let the wise men beat the drums too soon
We were just children of the moon

No one to turn to
Nowhere to run to even if we could...

Children, children of the moon watch the world go by
Children, children of the moon hiding from the sky...

~Alan Parsons Project, Children of the Moon

This is a redraw of a pencil artwork of the "original 5" gang from the Tale of Ace Gallagher....... that I drew 20 years ago. WHAT. It was fun to give it a fresh digital look with all the skillz I have now!

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