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A Tale of Ace Gallagher Short from Book #1
February 24, 2025

A spattering of applause followed as Ace bowed, set down the guitar, and returned to his table.

Athena was both leaning on her hand and using it to cover her mouth and chin. She took one look at Ace's ear-to-ear grin and added her other hand to her ever-reddening cheeks.

“So?” Ace slid back into the seat breathily.

“I’m not sure I like all this attention,” Athena spoke through her hands and flashed him a coy glance. “But you play–and sing–really well.”

“I had good inspiration.” He admitted as his own cheeks flushed pink.

Athena relocated her hands under her chin. “You are quite the charmer, Ace.” Her expression faded when she noticed Ace’s head droop, struggling against the pain from his ever-worsening curse–despite trying to hide it behind a clenched fist.

When he glanced up, his expression soured for a completely different reason. 

“Well, if it isn’t Ace Gallagher,” the first of two young women stepped up to the table, her body twisting within a short, clingy black dress as she spoke. “I must say I’m surprised.”

“Surprised you’d risk showing your face again after all you did the last time you were in Montrose.” The second added as she casually leaned her hip against the table beside him. Her ruffled skirt had a slit up to her mid-thigh, and she was sure to twist it towards Ace.

The young man grunted to clear his throat, glancing between a somewhat confused Athena and the two women. “Oh yeah?”

The first girl sneered. “You left quite a few casualties in your wake.” She gave a quick glance to Athena, who seemed both confused and concerned. “Sweetheart, allow me to break it to you easy–you're not the first lady he’s ever sung that song to.”

“Or the second,” the other added, rolling her eyes.

Athena’s mouth opened, but Ace was quick to recover the attention. “All right, ladies; if your issue’s with me, I’d appreciate it if you’d leave her out of this.”

“Oh, this concerns her too,” she put up a hand to shield her mouth from Ace. “Watch where he puts his hands,” she hissed a whisper.

“Hey!” Ace spouted, banging both hands onto the table. He caught Athena’s eyes for a moment before the girls again pulled them away.

“Also, when you leave, you’d better make sure you have everything you came in with.” She narrowed her eyes at Ace. “The cozier he gets, the more will end up ‘missing’.”

Ace's fingers clenched. “That's not fair!”

“What you do isn't fair!” She spat.

“Look: I’m sorry–is that what you're looking for??” Ace’s brows were heavily furrowed as his breathing grew increasingly labored.

“‘Sorry’ doesn’t undo what you've done!” The girl mocked, sliding her hip across the side of the table and leaning into his face. “‘Sorry’ means nothing when you’re still stealing from any woman you can charm!”

Ace was pressed as far against the back of his chair as he could be, his face flushed from anger, disappointment, and the confrontation itself. “Is there anything else you’d like to say while you're accosting me?” His voice was a raspy whisper.

The two girls turned to Athena. 

Her expression and stiffened posture remained guarded as she looked back at them.

“I think we’ve made our point.” One said without even a glance over her shoulder. “Come on, Jess.”

The young women sauntered away, returning to their seats at a table with two other women, joining their pairs of eyes to the glares beating down from across the room.

Ace grunted to clear his throat, his body relaxing as the threat settled. “Sheesh,” he raked his fingers through his hair almost nervously. “Now we’ve really got all the attention.”

Athena turned her head away from the stares and looked cautiously upon Ace. “Can we step outside?”

He sighed. “Yeah, that’s probably for the best.”

The young woman stood and started to the door with Ace struggling to keep up. He had scarcely stepped outside when Athena abruptly turned around.

“Was that true?”

Ace straightened up. “What?”

“Was what they said true?”

He wheezed in a deep breath, watching Athena’s once warm eyes turn cold. “Come on,” he said nervously, “don’t tell me you're letting them get to you. You know how–uh–exes can be sometimes–”

“Do you really steal from any woman you can charm?” Athena repeated their words bluntly. 

The gambler could tell bluffing would no longer work. “When you’re desperate and starving on the streets,” his voice softened, “you sometimes do things you're not proud of.”

Athena’s form sunk with disappointment. “So, was I next?” Her words were barely a whisper.

“What–no!” His fist clenched at his chest.

“How can I be sure?”

Ace's jaw went slack. “I'm gonna get this from you, too?”

“I’d like to know if I can trust you.”

“You can,” he answered succinctly.

“Not if I’m the next pawn in your game,” Athena frowned.

“Pawn,” Ace grit his teeth and coughed, “that's absolutely not what you are!”

“Then, look me straight in the eye and tell me you weren’t just going to steal from me,” she took a step closer to him, “that all this singing and charming and rescuing isn’t just some ploy to get something out of me.”

Ace hesitated as realization struck. After years of taking all he could, he had never once thought of stealing from Athena. He had never once thought about how he could use her to his advantage. He had reached into his own money bag to pay for her rescue without a single thought to what could have happened next, and in return, she had been kind to him. That was all he could have asked for.

Athena’s lips pressed tightly as Ace lingered in silent thought. “I think I need to go.”

Ace jolted out of his mind. “Wait!”

“I’m sorry,” Athena backed up. “I really do hope you can get healed from the curse, but I think it’s best if you finish without me.”

“Athena!” He reached for her hand, though she kept it out of reach, “I would never steal from you! You are not a pawn! I–I may have sang that song to other people, but, I swear, this is the first time it's ever felt right–” 

“Then, maybe we can catch up in Fortanya,” she dismissed him and turned away.

“Athena, please!!” He struggled to breathe and retain his composure as the woman walked gracefully away from him. He could not immediately find the strength to run after her; he could not cause his feet to move.

He could only watch as she continued down the road in silent agony.

“Allan!” She called, squinting at the skies in an attempt to find the black bird against the darkening sky. She whistled his call as she continued walking, but she still received no answer. “Where is he…”

She had barely turned the corner when she was met by Mioko as he approached from camp.

“Hey Athena!” Mioko's smile was quick to fade when he noticed her pained expression. “What's up?”

Athena attempted a smile. “I just... I need to head back.”

“Oh, okay,” the Weivan nodded, allowing her to pass. He paused, turning as a heaviness filled his chest. “Back to camp, or back to Fortanya?”

Athena glanced over her shoulder at him. Her face was bent with disappointment, tainted with a hint of sadness. She could not immediately find words to speak; she could only turn and continue on to camp to collect her belongings.

Mioko watched her for a moment before returning his attention to the street. He quickly pointed out a familiar face approaching from across the road.

“Dorian,” he rushed toward him, “did you see Ace?”

The Kalgaran had initially backed up when the Weivan came at him. “No; why?”

“I think something happened,” he turned as his hand pointed behind him. “Athena just came back without him and went back to camp… I think something may have happened between them.”

“All the more reason to stay out of this,” Dorian muttered and attempted to step past him.

“I just want to make sure everything’s okay,” Mioko, instead, stepped into his path. “We need everyone to continue on the mission.”

“Technically, we only need you and Ace,” Dorian tilted his head in an attempt to look around Mioko. “You’re the one who knows the counter-curse Ace needs. The rest of us are just here because…” He trailed off.

“Because Ace owes you potions?” Mioko replied, eyeing him.

“Yeah,” he draped his thumbs on his pants pockets.

Mioko nodded. “Well, I guess we can just go back to camp and wait to see if he comes back soon. I haven’t seen Hylas in a while, either.”

“Didn’t he say he was going to check with the Patrol office here? Also, we told everyone we were leaving for the mountains tomorrow. What’s it matter where they’re up to tonight–”

A rustling in the bushes beside them garnered both of their attention. 

As the shadowed figure stepped into the street light, Dorian quickly unslung his staff and thrust it at the young woman who appeared.

“Wait,” the Amorfian threw up her hands. “I mean no harm.”

“Then, stay there,” Dorian inched the staff further.

“Dorian,” Mioko glanced at him, only to look back at the tall Amorfian before them. “What do you need, miss?”

The Amorfian gave Dorian a weak scowl before turning her silver eyes to Mioko. “I’m sorry for overhearing but… did you say Hylas?”

“I did,” Mioko answered, still looking at her in awe. “He’s traveling with us; though, I haven’t seen him since we set up camp.”

“Oh,” her eyes fell away. The furred collar that draped over her shoulders was soon hidden behind her long black hair as she turned her head. Her deep black dress aided in blending her back into the shadows–save from her pale arms and legs.

“But you can stay with us until he returns.”

“What??” Doran finally broke eye contact with the Amorfian to shoot Mioko an incredulous look. “She’s the one who tried to steal your totem the other night!”

“Her?” Mioko gazed at her, half-dumbfounded and half-taken aback.

She wrinkled her nose at Dorian in disgust. “Oh, like you’ve never made a mistake in your whole life.”

“You accidentally tried to steal from him?”

“No,” she barked at him, only for her voice to soften, “I simply know, now, I shouldn’t have. I shouldn’t have been so desperate…”

The Weivan could see the guilt in her wandering eyes, and he took a small step forward. “I can imagine it’s difficult to be so far from your home. Did you come here to look for Hylas?”

“And what is he doing so far away from his home?” Dorian added under his breath.

“The same could be asked of you, Kalgaran” her eyes narrowed on him. “I didn’t think any of your kind were allowed to leave after your king was murdered.”

“Hold on,” Mioko stepped between the two when he noticed Dorian’s bristling. “Making jabs at each other isn’t helping anything,” he stood firmly. “As far as I’m concerned, we’re all waiting for people, so you can wait with us until Hylas and the others return. Then we can decide who needs to continue on to break the curse with Ace.”

“Curse?” The Amorfian’s bitter expression lightened.

A scream broke out in the forest nearby, silencing all three.

“...Was that Athena?” Mioko asked worriedly, eyes darting into the distance.

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Disappointed and upset, Athena walked briskly down the streets of Montrose. She clutched the straps for her sword and her bag of belongings–both slung over her right shoulder after her brief stop at camp. The street lights stationed along the way were bright, blocking her ability to see past them. In the spaces between them, however, she continued to scan the skies for Allan.

She again whistled his call, slowing to a stop and holding out her arm. “Come on, Allan!”

A croaking sound swooped past her, and a raven fluttered onto a wooden sign of a building across the street.

“Oh,” she sighed with relief. “You were worrying me!” With another whistle, she held up her forearm higher.

The black bird tilted his head and leapt from the sign. He again swooped past her arm and flew down the cross street instead.

“Hey!” Athena darted after him. The street lights were sparsely placed on the cross road, and she quickly lost him in the shadows. “Allan!” Judging by the flapping of his wings, she rushed down the road until its stone-paved surface gave way to a grassy glen.

She caught a glimpse of him in the moonlight before he slipped into the forest.

“He must think we’re going back to camp,” she grit her teeth and ran after. “No!” She called and gave another whistle. “Come back! Allan!”

She fought through low-hanging branches and pushed through patches of moonlight until she ran straight into Hylas.

“Oh!” She bumped into him as the man held out his hands. “Sorry–I’m–chasing after Allan–did you see him?”

“Shh,” Hylas laid his hand on her shoulder and attempted to calm the young woman as she caught her breath, “deep breaths.”

Athena stepped back. “Sorry.”

The Amorfian’s silver eyes glistened as he eyed the bag on her back. “Are you going somewhere?”

She instinctively touched the straps still on her arm. “Oh, um,” she paused, “yeah, I’m… heading back to Fortanya.”

“Alone? At this time of night?”

“Well, once I find Allan, I’ll probably just go stay at an inn until morning…”

Hylas stepped forward just as she took a step back. “Are you not going to continue with us?” He paused, waiting for an answer that never came. “Is everything all right?”

The young woman frowned, finding concern in his eyes. “Yeah. It’s fine.”

He scooted closed. “It’s Ace, isn’t it,” he said simply. “He hurt you.”

Athena stopped moving away, pausing. “What–how did you…”

“I could see a connection growing between you,” he glanced aside. “And since he’s not here with you now…”

She sighed. “He disappointed me,” she admitted.

“It’s such a shame. He seems nice, but I’ve heard it from more than a few Patrolmen: he’s a wanted man.”

“Wanted?” Athena turned her head slightly towards him.

“Patrol has been instructed to keep an eye on him. Without real evidence, he has to be caught in the act or in an altercation before he can be captured for thievery,” his eyes slid back to her, “but I’m sure you know he’s a gambler too. It’s only a matter of time before he gets careless–and gets caught.”

A pang of regret pulsed through her. Despite everything she had just heard, thinking of Ace as a criminal didn’t seem right. Would a man with no remorse admit that he had done something wrong? Or perhaps he truly did feel different around her–enough to confess something he may never have confessed before.

“I need to go find him,” she muttered to herself and started to turn.

She jumped as Hylas took her elbow.

“But, you don’t need someone like him,” he held her arm firmly. “A gambler and a thief is no man for such a beautiful woman as yourself... he’ll always care about luck more than you... and luck is such a fragile thing...”

Athena felt her back against a tree.  She was so distracted she didn’t even realize she had moved until Hylas held her arms against it.

“...Almost as fragile as you are...”

“Hylas,” Athena gazed up at him as he held her tighter.

A toothy grin spread across his face.

She tried to wrench her arms out of his grasp to no avail. She gnashed her teeth and tried to kick him, but she was shoved backward into the tree and held firmly against it with his body. Pinned, she threw her head into his chin.

He yelled and recoiled, but only held Athena tighter as tiger-like claws poked into her arms and fangs inched closer to her cheek.

Athena screamed–only for Hylas to clap his clawed hand against her mouth.

“I’d shut up and hold still if I were you.” He sneered.

 

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Eeep. I forgot about this part, lol. But I had part of it rewritten so I finished it out for another short.

I fleshed out the tavern scene since... honestly I'm not sure what prompts Athena to freak out and leave in the first draft, but having two of Ace's "exes" show up and show just how much of a not so nice kind of person he's been really drove that home. I also hate but love how Ace's hesitance is from realizing "oh dang this girl really is different" but that hesitation makes Athena think he can't actually look her in the eye and say it. Oof.

Hylas has been kind of a creep around Athena prior to this, and this makes his true intentions known. Athena walks through the dimly lit forest in the original, but I felt as a single lady (even though she can defend herself) she'd be a lot smarter than that and take the route through town. But geting distracted and led away from passer-bys and street lights made that fit a little better.

Never fear, however, because Ace also heard the scream and runs to the rescue!

After all that gets settled is when the "Giselle" sketch takes place - and Athena learns whole truth about Ace's 'history'. I'm acually filling in gaps, omgosh.

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Song: "Threat"

Shael searches for Sapphyre... and finds her necklace at the edge of the kelp forest.

Kalli: Lady Aria! I've spoken to everyone! No one has seen Phyre!

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Kalli: ...And I have to wonder... if it was my fault... I was rude to her... I shouldn't have said what I did. It's hard for her because... because of her... heritage.

Aria: (consolingly) Kallista, dear...

Shael: Lady Aria!!

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Kalli: The necklace for Phyre!

Shael: ...Near the kelp forest.

Aria: ...No!

Kalli: You... you don't think...

Shael: I fear the SHARKS have taken her...

Kalli: Lady Aria-what should we do?

 

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Aria: ...We cannot risk war... we are not certain she was taken.

Kalli: Even if she doesn't think she is, she is still one of us.

Aria: ...And we will fight for her.

The scene transitions to the other side of the kelp forest.

Shark King: Otieno! Iolana!

Otieno: Sir.

Shark King: ...Where have you two been?

Otieno: We were scouting, sir. Like you said to. Patrolling the kelp forest and the outskirts of the Merkind's realm.

Iolana: And we found a MERMAID in the kelp forest.


Dorian as the scarred and bitter Shark King fits surprisingly well, hah. But do I remember his name? I do not.

 

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King: A mermaid?

Iolana: Yes... we have reason to believe she is a scout sent to spy on us.

Keiki: She's right!!

King: Keiki...

Keiki: But Father–

King: One mermaid alone is not a threat.

Iolana: She had a HUMAN with her.

King: ...Go on.

Iolana: This one is always alone... until now. It could be the merkind are using humans to better plan an attack!

Keiki: Father, we must do something! We must retaliate!

King: We cannot be so quick to fight, my son... To engage the Merkind in battle will mean casualties on both sides, and we are still recovering our numbers.


Keiki looks like he may be based on Henri from the Elemental Guardians fanfic who later grew up to become Phoenix in ToAG. Also still no one seems to be baffled by why a human is underwater but ok!

 

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King: However... if what you say is true, it would be best to prepare than to be caught off guard.

Keiki: So we will fight them?

Iolana: Should we prepare for war?

King: Yes. Prepare for war. But if there is no threat... (gazes at Iolana and Otieno) ...it will be on YOUR heads.

Iolana's form mirrors Sapphyre as they gaze blankly onward.

Chris: Phyre! (cozies up to her) Still as elusive as ever.

Phyre: I was waiting for you.

Chris: I suppose I did say I wanted to come up for air again.

The two swim up to the surface, past the edge of the kelp forest.


….AND that's all that's drawn. I'll try to fill in the rest of the story as best as I can remember using the music in one last part!

 

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Song: "Pursuit"

Iolana: Otieno, would you look at that!

Otieno: Iolana, I see it... though it's awfully hard to believe...

Iolana: The mermaid has returned... and she's brought a two-legged friend with her... And now's the time we finally pay her a visit.

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Otieno: Well! Look here!

Iolana: The lone mermaid again separated from her companions!

Phyre: Sharks!

Otieno: That's right, but if you're nice we may let you go...

Phyre: You can't do anything to me–we're at peace!

Otieno: You're alone... who's gonna know?


Iolana and Otieno are Dawn and Ed if you couldn't tell, lol. I think I looked up all kinds of water-related names for the characters; they’re all very unique. Also I love how no one questions how a human is underwater like this.

 

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Chris: I don't believe she is alone!

Iolana: (jealously) Yes, Otieno, I don't believe she IS...

She swims closer to Christopher.

Iolana: You, however, HUMAN, would make a fine trophy... A proper tribute to the Shark King... So, while we're at it, we might as well bring him a mermaid SPY!

Phyre: You'd call me a spy, would you? The only way you'd do that... is if you could have caught me!


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Otieno: I knew they'd bolt!

Iolana: Shut up!!

Chris: Up ahead–we can hide in there!

Phyre: The kelp forest? But that's the division between our land and the sharks!

Chris: It doesn't look like the sharks are following boundary lines at the moment.

Phyre: Good point.

Otieno: They're going in the kelp forest!

Iolana: That'll slow them down!

They swim away as the sharks follow after, leaving Sapphyre's necklace behind.

 

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As Sapphyre and Christopher–and Iolana and Otieno–make their way through the kelp forest, they get caught in the vines.

Phyre: They're going to catch us–

Llyr: No they won't–come this way!

He hides them away in the kelp.

Iolana: Wh–where are they?? We couldn't have lost them!

Otieno: I don't see them up ahead... Maybe they've gone back the other way!


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Llyr: Good, they turn away.

Sapphyre notices Christopher has a hand on her shoulder and they nervously part.

Llyr: You are safe for now, though they may return.

Chris: Thank you, sir, we truly appreciate it... May I ask who–who you are?

Llyr: Oh! I apologize... I am Llyr, and you are in the realm of the Kelp-Dwellers!

 

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Song: "Forest"

Kambu: Ah! Welcome! Llyr, thank you for guiding these two. I am Kambu, leader of the Kelp-Dwellers.

Phyre: (shyly) I'm Phyre. And this is Christopher.

Kambu: A pleasure. It has been some time since we have seen a mermaid--or a greater expanse since we've seen a human. How is it you breathe underwater?

Chris: Well–

Phyre: I've never heard of Kelp-Dwellers before.

Kambu: Ah, because we live in secret. We are found when we need to be found.

Chris: Actually, Llyr found us.

Kambu: We do find those who need us if necessary!


Leafy Mioko and Raeya! 

 

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Kambu: Llyr is young, but he knows what he is doing.

Kelp Queen: You are free to stay as long as you wish.

Kambu: All are welcome! No one is turned away!

Chris: I believe we should stay awhile, don't you think?

Phyre: But what about you? Don't you need to return to the surface?

Chris: I'll let you know when I'm ready to return. Let's enjoy this peaceful place for now... together.


I don't remember the Kelp Queen/Raeya's name…

 

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Sapphyre and Christopher find themselves getting closer...

But Iolana and Otieno are unable to find them.

Otieno: Come on, Iolana, we're not going to find them.

Iolana: ...Fine.

They swim away, reluctantly.


That was a quick falling in love sequence, lol. It’s like the whole story was put on 2x speed (or more lol).

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Song: "Storm"

The man is taking on water and his sails are torn as he battles to stay afloat in the storm.

Christopher: This–this may be it... This is where my journey will... end!

The boat capsizes.


Christopher was an attempt at a new character but he was heavily influenced by the Eleventh Doctor. With the rest of the characters being borrowed I’m surprised I was concerned about making him a separate character, honestly.

 

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Song: "Deep"

The man struggles to return to the surface, but the water, waves, storm, and the breaking boat prevent him. He soon falls motionless, sinking to the ocean floor... beside a mermaid.

 

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She swims up to him, cautiously. 

Phyre: A human... what do I do? He'll die... if he hasn't already. But I'm not supposed to do anything... he's a HUMAN... But...

 

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Gently leaning over him, Sapphyre brings her lips to his and kisses him.

At once, the man gasps, eyes wide open. Horrified, Sapphyre darts away as he struggles to catch his 'breath.'

Christopher: What... How... I'm... I'm underwater! I'm breathing...

Their eyes meet.


I'm not sure what gives Sapphyre the gill-giving ability in this story… it’s possible it’s a mermaid thing (since she mentions how she’s not ‘supposed’ to do something to help him–insinuating that she could?) or maybe Lady Aria gave her the ability like Neva does in the final. If it was ever explained, it was in the bits I didn’t get to and don’t remember.

 

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Chris: Wait! You're–you're a–Gahh! Th-this water! This is just... so odd...

He feels his neck.

Chris: AGHH!! My neck! What on earth?! GILLS?? (defeatedly) My word... I have got to be dreaming. I've died and I'm dreaming. I have to be... Seeing things... Breathing underwater...

He notices Sapphyre.

 

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Song: "Shadowplay"

Chris: But... but it's not a dream, is it. I'm really here, and you're really a mermaid. And you... you saved me...

Phyre: (backs away before he can touch her) ...Yes.

Chris: ...Why?

Phyre: You needed saving...

Chris: And the... GILLS... How long will these be here?

Phyre: I'm not sure... long enough for you to return to the surface.

Chris: What makes you think I want to return?

Phyre: Because-because you're human... you belong there.

Chris: I suppose so... (reaches for her hand) ...What's your name?

 

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Sapphyre again retreats.

Chris: ...Sorry.

Phyre: What's yours?

Chris: Christopher. And you?

Phyre: Phyre.

Chris: Phyre?

Phyre: As in Sapphyre.

Chris: ...Beautiful name. It fits you. (watches her swim by) ...You don't say much, do you?

Phyre: I don't often speak to humans.

Chris: What about other mermaids?

 

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Sapphyre turns away, flustered.

Chris: What's wrong?

Phyre: (rushes at him) What about you?

Chris: (surprised) What about me?

Phyre: Why would you say you would not return to the surface?

Chris: I am merely a traveler... I've no ties to anyone on the surface... I move where I must, stay where I must... I was sailing where I must when the storm did me in...

Phyre: Do you feel you... belong on the surface?

Chris: I suppose... Don't quite belong anywhere. Why? You seemed rather defensive a moment ago...

Phyre: It was nothing.

Chris: Is it really? Something tells me there is as much about you that is hidden... As there is about ME.


Oh, the dialog… lol

 

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Phyre: It's just... nothing. I have a few friends. Sometimes I just need to be alone. More than the other mermaids... a lot more...

They get closer.

Phyre: (turns away) ...Why am I telling you this...

Chris: I'm not sure. But something tells me you needed to.

Phyre: (closes her eyes and begins to give in) I suppose.

But two figures are watching in the distance…

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